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ThatSexyDude
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HERE IT IS

Post by ThatSexyDude »

well i accidently put this in the wrong place, i guess nobody wanted to move this so i'm just putting it here


your Goonies? Pair of nerdz. watch you Duck Like a Loony character!
claim you streets but u be scared of burbz im not rick but yet i cruely flare on herbz
how you stronger then i my dick longer then ties so you cant fuck with me
threesome still cant fuck with me even being my siamise twin you wouldnt touch on me!
i cut you and let hobos fuck you literally a girl touch me i still hit her b
if she still in my bed i'll still kick her b like a game of soccer
you wouldnt defeat me if you had a gang of jockers
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Needs some work
some decent lines but some of em are played
the length of the lines kinda toyed with the execution
then again it wasn't too bad
just need to work on what your doin' a bit
think up more punches then try it
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