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The Battles Never Over Pt. 2

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Battle's Never Over (Pt 2)



I'm comin up Haz.. now come and Pass me the light
its like Arv should be a Doctor.. how nasty I write..
the battles never over, but we repeatedly prove undisputable
sure I'm pretty cocky..cuz the flows too fuckin beautiful!
put u squares into cubicles.. n invented..a new writing dimension
id ignite my potential while never losing sight of intentions..
I always slayed others in the dark...see i never wanted attention
I silenced the lambs.. so the shepherd gotta be mad at me
the best record ratio.. people think twice before they battle me
Never theoretically speaking.. just proven facts and truths
They come attack n "oops", they fall back cuz of their lack of proof
see its been a journey to get to be where arvincible's now
I felt like a rebel student tryin to get the principles down
bein lyrically sound, i had to beat others so they could see worth
I had to convince them i was nice..by makin a mean verse..
But Plex still had to define what classic verses were for him
So arv wasn't explosive just consistent.. i was the "Spurs" of this forum
Oh please do.. start a thread to debate if I'm skilled or not
only Haz can speak cuz he's the only other who has filled the spot
Ive seen one hit wonders, so called legends to some
but ill kill this belief like severin nuns to see ur reverend run
Point taken.. claimin whats rightfully mine.. a spot as one of the realest..
Bill in his prime was just as strong.. as my first month up in illest..
Kurse got his 13th win... but retired when I was callin him out
Said he only did audio... that nigga knew he'd balls in his mouth
Plex didnt favor me neither, you can tell by his decisions
we almost battled but he chose to "four fit" like gang bang positions
At the same time i just had to settle with miilz the hater..
But knew in my mind i wanted to CAP COM like Guile's creators
Phantom was a nobody.. figuratively and in terms of rep
cuz he never earned respects so my battle left him burned n wrecked
I grew up with a pen and a pad.. now im puttin em toys into work
I had every other member on this site sayin "that new boy is a jerk"
Had a dude that talked a lot... man did i make mark's jaw thin
I was one of the main sparks that made that crew SAW spin..
Yeah I Took a lot of punches but I guess arv's chin's hard
I often sparred..n put a Pierce on opponent's backs like Boston stars..
Cmon son the battles never over.. This is just a taste of whats comin..
losses? u'll face it in abundance... i wont stop even after i make it to the hundreds..

-- 21 Feb 2010 03:13 --

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Re: The Battles Never Over Pt. 2

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This Was Straight, I've Seen Better From You. It Seem More Like You We're Just Throwing Out An Warning Shot If Anything. The Flow Was Consistent, The Punches We're Ok, None To Hard Hitting. Keep Doing You Though, I Know You Can Type Up Something Better, From Lookin At Ya Previous Battles Though..

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Re: The Battles Never Over Pt. 2

Post by complexity »

Definitely a lot of shots taken at me throughout this piece. From your perspective, the facts as you see them.

The spur line, the principal one, the lamb line, and reverend were my favorites.

The flow was consistent.

I'm wondering why this piece doesn't have any feedback after the overall positive response that the last one received. Maybe you haven't left enough feedback.

This was sharp though.
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Re: The Battles Never Over Pt. 2

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I'm comin up Haz.. now come and Pass me the light
its like Arv should be a Doctor.. how nasty I write..

LOL

the battles never over, but we repeatedly prove undisputable
sure I'm pretty cocky..cuz the flows too fuckin beautiful!

Woord

put u squares into cubicles.. n invented..a new writing dimension
id ignite my potential while never losing sight of intentions..

coming Hard ..

I always slayed others in the dark...see i never wanted attention
I silenced the lambs.. so the shepherd gotta be mad at me
the best record ratio.. people think twice before they battle me
Never theoretically speaking.. just proven facts and truths
They come attack n "oops", they fall back cuz of their lack of proof

Going In ...

see its been a journey to get to be where arvincible's now
I felt like a rebel student tryin to get the principles down

lmaoo

bein lyrically sound, i had to beat others so they could see worth
I had to convince them i was nice..by makin a mean verse..

Going tough ..


But Plex still had to define what classic verses were for him
So arv wasn't explosive just consistent.. i was the "Spurs" of this forum
Oh please do.. start a thread to debate if I'm skilled or not
only Haz can speak cuz he's the only other who has filled the spot

Haha .. Went in ..


Ive seen one hit wonders, so called legends to some
but ill kill this belief like severin nuns to see ur reverend run

Flows Nice yo n multis is Nice

Point taken.. claimin whats rightfully mine.. a spot as one of the realest..
Bill in his prime was just as strong.. as my first month up in illest..

Woord

Kurse got his 13th win... but retired when I was callin him out
Said he only did audio... that nigga knew he'd balls in his mouth

LoL

Plex didnt favor me neither, you can tell by his decisions
we almost battled but he chose to "four fit" like gang bang positions

Like This.

At the same time i just had to settle with miilz the hater..
But knew in my mind i wanted to CAP COM like Guile's creators

hitting consistently

Phantom was a nobody.. figuratively and in terms of rep
cuz he never earned respects so my battle left him burned n wrecked

Lmao phantom i remember him

I grew up with a pen and a pad.. now im puttin em toys into work
I had every other member on this site sayin "that new boy is a jerk"

Lmao word.

Had a dude that talked a lot... man did i make mark's jaw thin
I was one of the main sparks that made that crew SAW spin..

Talk To Em !! .

Yeah I Took a lot of punches but I guess arv's chin's hard
I often sparred..n put a Pierce on opponent's backs like Boston stars..

Lmaoo

Cmon son the battles never over.. This is just a taste of whats comin..
losses? u'll face it in abundance... i wont stop even after i make it to the hundreds..

Cool Way To End ..


This Is Def Worthy Of Being the Follow up to the First One.

You Went Hard , Punches were just going in, Strung Together Nice.
Lot of Good Mentions good Shots, good Shit fam.

Keep it Up , Stay Up n Keep Dropping
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