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villain wheeling this four door ford towards heaven
but i'm more towards repping warlord rhetoric
deafening from short tours revealing the illness
concealed bliss is missed tension stings so i lesson it
impressive with the appeal of chilling sealed in my head again
so skys i soared towards life is sure short
so i slide with more whores spending time in north shores
stretching lines for more snorts bending dimes like poor sports
hitting after the fore play's getting backwards my forte
when sipping yak with a shorty the slick wit is my short step in
so nitwits get listening to this short lesson
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Viral »

its pretty straight...some parts kinda seemed like the flow dropped real quick..but it caught back up...keep it up
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