solo artist

[~Symbolikull~]

u best rethink ur strategy, cant u see u were never good at writin naturally,
actually, i massively have everything to do wit u bein dope now ur actin drastically,
i am a general a veteran, got an army? send em in, ur hard as hell but who u better than,
jealousy? u need ur medicine, gettin amped thru a pc homie calm down ur adrenaline,
"fuck wit my money n ill kill u" u ain deadin anyone talkin guns but ur scared to carey one,
yall can continue sharing one, cuz its 1 to the 2, 3 and 4 gangstas but u scare me none,
cuz when its done, yes, im the illest, check ur watch cuz its time u feel it,
ill come there n find ur village, crime n pillage 4 no reason ill find ur rhyme n build it,
the guild is broken, open it up n air it out, still ur chokin now ill tear u down,
im waitin so come scare me now,

[complexity]

Nice.

Way better than that last written that I read.

The adrenaline line was smoking.

Whole thing was above par.

[QwarterZ]

I liked this....very well written....
nice punches...don't know the history...nonetheless a dope piece

keep writing!

[Lawgix]

lmao.... keep em comin dude...

[~Symbolikull~]

jus have to wait n see

thanx for the feed u two

post me a link if u want some feed on anything

[Lawgix]

jus have to wait n see

mmhmm for sure son... i gotchu

[~Symbolikull~]

yeah i cant wait to hear u rip me when u take this that far "FAM"

-- Tue Mar 16, 2010 7:43 am --

and i think u should read this one too if u think im jus dissin u or takin shots "homie"

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/what-vt15946.html