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gigabyte-007 v.s bones

Post by BennyBones »

4 bars house rules ect. no biting originality drop whenever before the end of the week

-- Wed Mar 17, 2010 9:54 am --

ok i guess ill go first


ehmmm...
da bullshits stop now dogg, you know ya skills are horriable/

da only real shit you ever dropped was in ya grandmothas toilet bowl/

and the only swagga u got is when u dance on a stripper pole/

ima verbaly kill this illegal immigrant and ship'em back to mexico/

you can try attack back and claim u can break bones son/

but the only time u ever gave damage is when u dislocated ya jaw to take one/ uhn..

ya career stops here dont put ya face on ya sig/

ill make you fade to black faster then the hat on his head/ lol



-nothin personal-




you should change ya name to terabytes and maybe u can get a thousand gigs... jk

everything i drop is then and there so respect it
just addin it in not apart of the battle uppin

one!....
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Ma GRAMMAS HOT, its like FIRES NOT.. Wen i FRY YA SPORT? ..more beef than a FARMERS GOT / wen m in tha kitchen? ^i have 2 hand-Ls around^ ..like mosta ur MAMAS POTS // DROPIN IT DOWN, POPIN CLIPS, UPPIN THIS.. This fo0ls TOPIN ME? ..HOW? /u STOPIN ME NOW? ^dont make me laugh! ....like im WARNING A CLOWN // YOU IS DUMB ,FUCK! Catch him like flu,-bitch stupid n thruth-is ya CREW GETS NUMB STRUCK / ..wen i let him digest a blade.. Tha way my knife wil find a way to this mans heart... ^THROUGH HIS STOMACH^ !! (yet anotha knife line bone // TOUGH WITH THA SCRIPTS wen Giga get LOST IN THA BEAT, FLOSSIN MA WITS / pull yo heart outcha arse-hole. B u ain ^LOVING MA SHIT^ // u ll do NUTHING BUT QUIT, giga ANIALATE THEE.. This GUY'S A FAKE G/ team up wit ur bitch, she cudnt fuck me with force ...if both yall TRYED TA RAPE ME // i ll DRIVE YA CRAZY, literaly! Expect ta STUMBLE, SEE? / facin me is suicide on tha highway.. i ll make u turn into a car! ..like BUMBLE B /

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Post by MesaR »

this battle sucked too, the flow was not there gigabytes you're multi's were forced and a majorty of them didn't make sense, this was a REALLY SIMPLE BATTLE. there was no "ooh factor" or nothing, up you're game dudes, keep at it.. elevation will come!

Personals - Bones, you acutally had one about his avatar even though that bar didnt rhyme and it's not called a "sig"

Punchlines - Gigabytes,

Flow - bones..

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Post by Riggz »

Critique - Bones ... you seemed a bit elementary. Avoid played punches like shit/toilet bowels. Work on your rhyme structures (like stripper pole/ Mexico and sig/head).
Gig - the lack of structure in your verse makes it appear that it has no flow and is basically a bunch of rambling (even on black berry). Hard to decipher any flow to your verse. If the punches were there, it got lost in the clutter.

Flow - Bones
Punches - tie
Personals - Bones

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3-1 close this
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Post by BennyBones »

first off chill with how u talkin playa u dont know me homie, second i never heard it going that far on house rules in voting since ive been here so yea that gotta be new, third if i do gotta wait that long get ya fagget homies to vote just as fast as u did in our battle nigga, had niggas vote so fast would think obama was here bitch ass nigga... u know what close tis period im tired of seeing this shit give it to him if u want
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