Hold my own

[Haz]

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I'm Loading Then Unloading Vote 4 Logan is My Slogan
Medaling ways is What i'm Approaching, Roasting in Motion
Emotion is Potent As Coasting While i'm Smoking out the Ocean
Is that Sea Weed? I Don't See Seeds My Trident Is a Tyrant
i'm Terror of The Error,Paul Bearer in The Mirror, 1 Verse n i Will tear ya,
No bearing what i'm Sharing the Flaring is Like a Earing..
Won't go Over ya Head it's Beside, ya Ride Like a Parked Chevy
Yeah i Spark Deadly in The Park Ready For you to Bark Steady,
Puffing Nicotine i'm Holding .. Wait .. Like a Triple beam
Mister Clean when i Hit the Scene Dudes Gone is What I'm On,
You've dudes Spawned For Too Long, Who's Wrong, Who's Right?
Few Fight, U Bite.. your Styles a Flip of a Pile of Shit
i get The True Micz With The wildest Twist Lacin X files in Piff
I Can Run Miles with This instead i Run Pieces for Pieces
Leeches is feces I'm deep with the Speeches,i Make Sea's Freeze
Though if you Cross The Flow .. Its a Volcano Eruptin Across the Globe
U can see Pictures Off ya Lobes Though Most put that in a Coffin slow
I'm Known to Diss able Verses Like Punches is Named
I'm Praying For ya Tracks Like I'm Hunting a Train
I Don't Act like a loss is Nothing To Claim
Cause u gotta get Knocked Down to Come up in the Game
I'm in Silence Cause My bars are the Silencers ...
i tune these Radios down No need To get Violent Sir..
Haz a Coach in the Field his Approach Is To Seal a Deal With Hope To Appeal
When he Can't Cope with a Meal or Chokes cause He Steals
Till that Happens I'ma Hold My Own,I'm The Only One Thats Controlled My thrown

[QwarterZ]

Damn...them multi's was on point
looks like you were goin' in at the beginnin'
then I lost track...but it wasn't too bad
I'm diggin' the concept tho'.


Few Fight, U Bite.. your Styles a Flip of a Pile of Shit
i get The True Micz With The wildest Twist Lacin X files in Piff
I Can Run Miles with This instead i Run Pieces for Pieces
Leeches is feces I'm deep with the Speeches,i Make Sea's Freeze
^^^^^^I thought that was dope! keep writing!

[Riggz]

Amb, you always start out strong, and then you kind of just go until a null state somewhere in the middle. Like you get bored and not sure of where you're topic is heading. Always strong with the multies, just need to put the script down for a while come back to it later and find your topic again.


"I Don't Act like a loss is Nothing To Claim
Cause u gotta get Knocked Down to Come up in the Game" -- however, I liked this personal

[NoVeL]

^^^^ Cosign With Riggz, HaZ Your Usually Dope But This One Seemed Like You Didnt Really Know How 2 End It.. Like You Lost Topic Or You Got Lazy. Either Way Really Proud N Keep Elevating Because This Isnt This Best Ive Seen From You Yet!!

[Def-init]

"I'm Loading Then Unloading Vote 4 Logan is My Slogan
Medaling ways is What i'm Approaching, Roasting in Motion
Emotion is Potent As Coasting While i'm Smoking out the Ocean
Is that Sea Weed? I Don't See Seeds My Trident Is a Tyrant
i'm Terror of The Error,Paul Bearer in The Mirror, 1 Verse n i Will tear ya, "

Felt that forreal, fam.
This stands out to me over your usual drops.
What inspired this piece for you if ya dont mind me askin.

[M-Vario]

a slut load of multies there.

Few Fight, U Bite.. your Styles a Flip of a Pile of Shit
^^^that would hurt my feelings...geez

needed a bit o' *umpf for your verse tho