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directed at illests fake ass nigguhz!!!







ehuummm .. you know who you are!!




you ain't half nice, you the fuckin worse, a silly geek
no complexity, no style .... and got no Versatility
fuck them, they could diss me, hit me, lynch me
cuz my names getting tossed around like a ma fuckin frisbee
Quix be, one of the most hated cuz nigguhs getting jeleous
clips be, aimed and mah finger getting restless
you kids be lame, talkin bout paper when yah got none
and yah peep mah shit and there Savored when i drop-em
wether its the laser or dah glock son, i'm favored like i'm God-son
dah fuckin mayor of the drops-done, the slayer when the cops come
just a player, getting gwop...done shit colder than icicles
the type tah rob your house ... and the one tah steal yah bicycle
I'm amzing wid murder, dope wid artillery but you can say i'm dead nice!
but you fleas biteing my head off like some mother fuckin head lice
i ran the battle grounds ... and faced the best n threw grenades in fights
sliced you cowards ... wehter it was the switch blade or Serraded knifes
i deserve a Parade tonight ... celebrate the champ!
and don't hate me cuz your swag is shit .....just elevate it ... damn!

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yo man that was pretty cool.
from start to finish, legit, totally.
I see your still holdin it down yo,
Keep up the good work fam.
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thanks fam ^^^


drop a link and i'll drop feed!
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Good shit here bro. The multi's were there, I liked the rhyme scheme and I thought the opening four lines were dope as hell.
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werd thanks for the feed!! i'll holla at one yah drops!
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it was something different from you, you're other drops i have checked out have been lyrically better, but i am liking this drop a little bit more maybe because of the confidence you brang. it was a good drop keep it up,

fuck them, they could diss me, hit me, lynch me
cuz my names getting tossed around like a ma fuckin frisbee
Quix be, one of the most hated cuz nigguhs getting jeleous
clips be, aimed and mah finger getting restless
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again quix normally got good shit man you keep urself at a high level good shit bro nice flow set up damn near anything need to get on audio nigga
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Thannks fam ^
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/def-s ... 16106.html

for shizzle man.
Spent a fair amount of time on it.
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Quix wrote:directed at illests fake ass nigguhz!!!







ehuummm .. you know who you are!!




you ain't half nice, you the fuckin worse, a silly geek
no complexity, no style .... and got no Versatility
fuck them, they could diss me, hit me, lynch me
cuz my names getting tossed around like a ma fuckin frisbee

Alright. Nothing over the top, but you made your point.

Quix be, one of the most hated cuz nigguhs getting jeleous
clips be, aimed and mah finger getting restless
you kids be lame, talkin bout paper when yah got none
and yah peep mah shit and there Savored when i drop-em

Good rhyme scheme, the content wasn't great though.

wether its the laser or dah glock son, i'm favored like i'm God-son
dah fuckin mayor of the drops-done, the slayer when the cops come
just a player, getting gwop...done shit colder than icicles
the type tah rob your house ... and the one tah steal yah bicycle

I liked the first 2 bars better.

I'm amzing wid murder, dope wid artillery but you can say i'm dead nice!
but you fleas biteing my head off like some mother fuckin head lice

No.

i ran the battle grounds ... and faced the best n threw grenades in fights
sliced you cowards ... wehter it was the switch blade or Serraded knifes

Good.

i deserve a Parade tonight ... celebrate the champ!
and don't hate me cuz your swag is shit .....just elevate it ... damn!

Wudddup Illest?
Hmmm. A few dope lines, a couple came up short. It's nice to see some different heads dropping in the scriptures this week though.
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mayne i liked this had an aggressive type of flow as usual for you some nice punches started off slow but built up and i liked this piece nothin too fantastic but a strong piece in the long run
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by Riggz »

Quix, you're usually at the top of your game when you let your temper drive you.

I still think you'd make a better audio artist than a writer. This coming from anyone else would've seemed rather basic with a few nice punchlines scattered throughout; but most of us here know the history and can see through metaphores to find the humor in what you're referring to.

All in all it was ok. Seen better from you.
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