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Buddha · Post by **Buddha** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 11:41 am

aite i did dis trax wit my boi from canada

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:01 pm

Beats sick. Like some Eminem shit.

chorus sucks

All verses were straight. It seemed a little unorganized.
Maybe a little rushed. Lots of fillers.

All of you need to work on more complex schemes,
thoughts,wordplay. Things of that nature.

Overall I still liked this. And its got replay value.

Buddha · Post by **Buddha** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 5:13 pm

Sweetttt!!!

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 8:26 pm

The guy that did the first verse was amazing and the beat was really good he has skill, everything else sucked especially that chorus.

precise · Post by **precise** » Fri Sep 22, 2006 10:00 pm

yea, nice track, definately a song you can keep listenin too, good vocal styles, i agree with plex about not really feelin the chorus, and yea, this beat is fuckin great

overall, its dope as hell

Buddha · Post by **Buddha** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:13 pm

thx on feedback ya bum

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 3:23 pm

nice beat, good delivery....chorus is pretty crappy...pretty basic in the lyrical areas..overall it was pretty decent

Buddha · Post by **Buddha** » Sat Sep 23, 2006 7:02 pm

aite kool kool thx for the feedback

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