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deafshady
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against the wall

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1st
I KNOW YOU HATE IT DON'T CHA? YOU SEE ME SUCCEED
YOU'D RATHER SEE ME BLEED, BUT I'M REAL, I'M 3D
WE BREATHING THE SAME AIR.BUT YOU ACT LIKE I'M NOT HERE
FINGERS TIED,WHEN I SEE YOU SOLEMNLY SWEAR.

I'M KNOCKING ON YOUR FRONT DOOR, DEMANDING YOU TO COME OUT
YOU NEED TO GET ON MY LEVEL TO KNOW WHAT I'M ABOUT.

CAUSE WE FALLING,
HITTING ROCK BOTTOM.
GOTTA STEP UP
NOW TELL ME WASSUP

Chorus:
EVEN IF THE WORLD COMES CRASHING DOWN
AND EVEN IF MY LUCK WOULD TURN AROUND
I STAND TALL, PROUD BACK AGAINST THE WALL
AND EVEN IF THE HANDS OF TIME WOULD FREEZE
YOU WONT SEE ME BEGGING DOWN ON MY KNEES
I STAND TALL, PROUD BACK AGAINST THE WALL

2nd
NOT ASKING FOR NO FAVOURS DON'T WANT YOUR FRIENDLY DEEDS
DON'T WANT YOU TO BE MY SAVIOUR, I BITE THE HAND THAT FEEDS
NOTHING CHANGES WITHOUT THE FIRST STEP
STAY STILL, BUT NOT TO ADVANCE IS TO REGRESS

I'M KNOCKING ON YOUR FRONT DOOR, DEMANDING YOU TO COME OUT
YOU NEED TO GET ON MY LEVEL TO KNOW WHAT I'M 'BOUT

CAUSE WE FALLING,
HITTING ROCK BOTTOM.
GOTTA STEP UP
TELL ME WASSUP

Chorus:
EVEN IF THE WORLD COMES CRASHING DOWN
AND EVEN IF MY LUCK WOULD TURN AROUND
I STAND TALL, PROUD BACK AGAINST THE WALL
AND EVEN IF THE HANDS OF TIME WOULD FREEZE
YOU WONT SEE ME BEGGING DOWN ON MY KNEES
I STAND TALL, PROUD BACK AGAINST THE WALL

C-part:
WITHOUT A FIGHT, YOU WONT SEE ME GO DOWN
AND WITHOUT A FIGHT YOU WONT SEE ME FALL DOWN
SINCE I'M DOING THIS FOR MY PEOPLE
FOR ALL MY PEOPLE ALL MY PEOPLE.
WITHOUT A FIGHT, YOU WONT SEE ME GO DOWN
AND WITHOUT A FIGHT YOU WONT SEE ME FALL DOWN
SINCE I'M DOING THIS FOR MY PEOPLE
FOR ALL MY PEOPLE ALL MY PEOPLE.

Chorus:
EVEN IF THE WORLD COMES CRASHING DOWN
AND EVEN IF MY LUCK WOULD TURN AROUND
I STAND TALL, PROUD BACK AGAINST THE WALL
AND EVEN IF THE HANDS OF TIME WOULD FREEZE
YOU WONT SEE ME BEGGING DOWN ON MY KNEES
I STAND TALL, PROUD BACK AGAINST THE WALL
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Re: against the wall

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Deep Lyrics!! Alotta Pain N Emotion In There.. Pretty Deep. Would Love To Hear It In Audio!! Maybe You Could Have A Chick Sing The Hook... Just An Idea, It Also Sounds Like Your Dealing With Someone Who Is Sympathetic To Your Situation Thats Just Me Lookin In..
Last edited by NoVeL on Thu Apr 15, 2010 10:34 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: against the wall

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yo i m deaf but i cant speak so it hard on me to put anything in audio.. so hope if u help me out aii
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Re: against the wall

Post by QwarterZ »

this is purdy dope I like the vibe
honestly you should just write a book on these
like put your thoughts down then send em out or somethin'?

but definitly a good start on what your tryna express
keep writing my dude!
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Re: against the wall

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NOT ASKING FOR NO FAVOURS DON'T WANT YOUR FRIENDLY DEEDS
DON'T WANT YOU TO BE MY SAVIOUR, I BITE THE HAND THAT FEEDS
NOTHING CHANGES WITHOUT THE FIRST STEP
STAY STILL, BUT NOT TO ADVANCE IS TO REGRESS
enjoyed this...after readin other peoples complicated ass schemes...oh wait i just regressed..lol

Nahh just playin like said above..keep the message.. thats what ultimately matters... keep doin ya thing duke
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