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Vegas lifestyle, rollin dice, its foul
How I control my life, another sip of Mo on ice
Now, time to tear up the town on the motor bike
Just tell shorty, that I wont be home tonight, I got a fistful of white
So when I see her, I catch adrenaline pumpin, next im a slump
I hate to be her, when she see the lead in the trunk
Now she suggestin she move, but nah she a ghetto bitch
Give me a week of freakin no more questioning moves
Still keep a vest and a 2, my whole crew invest in a few
So you can rest in a few, Even if she screamin imma score a zone quick
N hit my nigga hoe crib, let her split the blow zip
Play with the flow itll leave ya in a hole kid
You and ya whole nigs rest in peace Corleone click
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


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Post by JDR »

Decent. Could of went harder tho. Vegas got so much in it. That's my spot right there.
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Post by QwarterZ »

WHAT? oh wait...nevermind...lol

I liked this very decent piece...but coulda seen more from you
I would like to see this thoroughly done I know you got it in you
but this seem'd short ended like you just wrote it cuz it sounded good and left out a lot of the piece
so it kinda dragged...but it was good nonetheless...keep writing my dude!
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Post by FlipSide »

Multies were on point in this one... though it was short and i woulve spit bout chips n shit prolly cuz i aint from there...maybe a gamble meta or two as well but eh..wtf do i kno
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