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The Free Agent Extravaganza ft. Plex, TheOneYouHate

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Funny what free agents will do for a modest gain/
Dirk Nowitzki should go back to being a Maverick, ala John Mccain/
sign like Kobe,even though, he's going to slow down/
on the ropes like McGrady, cursed his team, coach brown/
no nonsense like joe johnson, I just drop inspired topics/
I should probably get off the bull, Tyrus Thomas/
Ray Allen, I'll die a sonic, super, wild, styled, calm me down/
while nobody gives a fuck where you end up Kwame Brown/
Lebron, I'm beyond holy, nobody on this earth can hold me/
I'm the OG, man you are a fake ass, Spur of the moment, Ginobili/
the game is garbage, its nothing but a landfill/
I might just ride off into the sun, something like Grant Hill/
or should I stand still, while weak MC's see success like J Hood/
play good, and be the center of the universe, aint no Haywood/
I'll stay put, like Rondo, go on a rap tour like Toronto/
pray you get better in the mean time like Colorado does George Carl/
fuck today, its all about tomorrow, though Lebron's jocking Jay/
the only way to top the Boston trade, is a blockbuster, Bosh and Wade/
plant a seed, Al Harrington, kings can't stand to lose, we plan to win/
only way Lebron is wearing a Nick Jersey in 2010, throwing back Anderson/
that's magic, street ballers like me, scare the pros/
cuz I bare my sole like Derek Rose, but forgotten like Eric Snow/



You Know i'm Tha Man in Charge My Hammers Large
i Gotta Whole Team That's Suited Up in Camouflage
Never Be Afraid Of Tha Street Talk My Fleet Stalk
But You Better Always Be Afraid Of Tha MIA Heat Talk
i Dont Gotta Point To Guard So i Pull A Wade On Them
i Was Made Back Then Drop A 9 And i'll Spray Back Ten
Stop Talkin Homie You A Don? i's Hassle 'Em... (Udonis Haslem)
Been On Top Of Tha Hill it's What i Built My Castle On
You Know i'm At Tha Point Just Call Me J.J. Barea
But if You Wanna Go Hard in Tha Paint My AK Will Slay 'Em... (Andrei Kirlenko)
Go Down Low i'll Start Duncan Call Me Richard Jefferson
My Tony Parker Running Things it'll Leave Ya Stressin Son
Roger That i Put Up Bricks i've Always Been A Mason.. (Roger Mason)
Never See Me Chasin Paper Cuz it's Big Ben i'm Racin
it's Like i'm Tayshaun Prince But With My Tech i Will Bynum
LeBron James Free? Call Me Tha Cavs i Will Sign 'Em
Sorry i'm Not Caron But i Gotta Butler Cuz i'ma Hustler
Carmelo Anthony i Silence Tha Crowd Like i'm A Muffler!
Whether it Be A Chill Dress Or A Whore For A Buck.. (Josh Childress/Al Horford)
i'm Runnin Down Tha Middle Cuz i Already Tore it Up
i'm Michael Redd Shootin With A Jerry Stack House
i'll Prolly Lose Yao Ming But i'll Still Pull Tha Mac Out!
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Re: The Free Agent Extravaganza ft. Plex, TheOneYouHate

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This was purdy nice, I like the concept
very different, but still very knowledgable on trivial thoughts
both of y'all came across nice, and did your thing no doubt
very smooth transition between both verses aswell
I'd quote y'all but I'm tryna write but thought I'd browse...nice work guys!
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on topic and hella clever. good multis. smooth transition. only thing I would work on is flow. Maybe I'm trippin, but I put this on a drum beat and tried to vocalize it just cause i was curious and it didnt work. I could be wrong though it's hard to tell when reading shit, so you never know.
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Probably because its punchlines, not written to any specific beat. Anytime you use a lot of names, it slows down the flow. Neither of our drops had particularly good flow either, JJ's obviously better mine. It was more about the cleverness, I'd like to say.
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Creativity is right..and dam yall musta been watchin the nba all day to come up with this...i love the use of names on word play.... Skillz
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