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I could draw a pen n sword, leave ya appendix sore
stress the pennants source, then aprehend its scores
leaving every appendage torn, I'ma penniless whore
servin' a cold beverage, sportin' a pretentious spore
spittin' spite and splittin' atoms till they form adam
tryna even the score then pass em in the rectum cavern
kidney stones kicked, flashin' a crevice of disctraction
I'm the shit, sorry I thought I'd just discuss the action
only if it disgusts a fraction, or even helps disrupt....damn them
they couldn't fathom the pattern as the tenders is re-render'd
repeat offenders, leave the scent of piss on sick selections
but I dephict the emblem, raised and burned, when their face is chur'd
should I say char'd, I swerve and charge, I'm disturb'd with bars
I'm like a earnest dart, how? I focus on bull's eyes and pull my...
self back, it's well facts, I'm the only one hiding in wool's hide
I'm un-rule-eye.....fluck it I'm done
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dude this was filthy, was this off the top??
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yea....it was off the top
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I could draw a pen n sword, leave ya appendix sore
stress the pennants source, then aprehend its scores
leaving every appendage torn, I'ma penniless whore
servin' a cold beverage, sportin' a pretentious spore
spittin' spite and splittin' atoms till they form adam
tryna even the score then pass em in the rectum cavern
kidney stones kicked, flashin' a crevice of disctraction
I'm the shit, sorry I thought I'd just discuss the action


^^-That was dope i think u fell off after but when i say dope i mean like sum shit i'd expect from ruckus
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I could draw a pen n sword, leave ya appendix sore
stress the pennants source, then aprehend its scores
leaving every appendage torn, I'ma penniless whore
servin' a cold beverage, sportin' a pretentious spore
spittin' spite and splittin' atoms till they form adam
tryna even the score then pass em in the rectum cavern
kidney stones kicked, flashin' a crevice of disctraction
I'm the shit, sorry I thought I'd just discuss the action
this whole part was nice the 1st 2 bars where sick completely enjoyed the whole piece you did start to fall off but you still had a good verse but this beginning set the tone and the ending just didnt live up but still a really good verse bro keep it up
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tryna even the score then pass em in the rectum cavern
kidney stones kicked, flashin' a crevice of disctraction
I'm the shit, sorry I thought I'd just discuss the action
only if it disgusts a fraction, or even helps disrupt....damn them
LMAO!!!! ...i just had to laugh at that...but the whole piece is fire for it being off the top.. but i wont restate the stated... Other than it was dope
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