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personal odyssey

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i sit n rock in my seat
head bobbin to the beat
spittin barrages of heat
dodgin defeat
acknowledge and abolish the garbage pawned off as street
when obstacles become impossible
im cool as a tropical breeze
with unstoppable ease
ima collasus amongst bosses
a lyrical monstrosity
a perpetual instruement of terminal velocity
to be a martyr for hip hop
my personal odyssey
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i sit n rock in my seat
head bobbin to the beat
spittin barrages of heat
dodgin defeat
acknowledge and abolish the garbage pawned off as street
when obstacles become impossible
im cool as a tropical breeze
with unstoppable ease
ima collasus amongst bosses
a lyrical monstrosity
a perpetual instruement of terminal velocity
to be a martyr for hip hop
my personal odyssey
this is probably my favorite drop ive ever seen from you it was a small drop probably sound good on an audio flow thru me off in one spot but other than that it was good. but nothing that will make me want to read it again. it was kinda like that fun read that you only like once keep it up bro
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thank you again ill get it
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For real if u would spit this...i think it would be a hot lil drop... got some nice usage of word in there... u couldhave drop a lil harder tho..im shure u shure know that tho
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On the real this just reminds me of Young Dro
like you got that down south swag its purdy good
but if it was in audio you'd be killin' the flow
very nice work man! keep writing n using different styles
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Damn. This was hot! You should of made it longer. Nice vocab and use of multies.
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