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My uncle

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Heres a breakdown on my uncle sam
he helps all my fam Bundle grams
always prepared for a rumble man
casualties casually got puzzled hands
Flicking cards Just To play the Joke
The only thing Faith could Say Today is Hope
So my uncle keeps controlling Mean mug rolling
Fiend drugs unfolding in Teens Tug'd N Stolen
The lifes so crazy but my Unc don't care
He ain't on the line with those Drunken Stares
So nephews Told something thats took back
is a Crook't act but Unc'll Have u Looked trapped
if you try n crook back, 2 Hypocrites don't equal right
thats what the Wiesel writes N his People Like
we Have 2 protect our selves we represent the Peaceful Type
Truthfully we're self centered, most at least..
We don't take Light on shit Till we've Felt ember
dudes tend To Coast Back creep'd just to Choke at Peeps
cause How R we good when our Media Don't Even Have Our Ghosts At Peace
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Re: My uncle

Post by FlipSide »

Flowed very well... nice topic... Lost me a lil toward the end.. but nice drop..
Truthfully we're self centered, most at least..
We don't take Light on shit Till we've Felt ember
dudes tend To Coast Back creep'd just to Choke at Peeps
cause How R we good when our Media Don't Even Have Our Ghosts At Peace
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: My uncle

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Heres a breakdown on my uncle sam
he helps all my fam Bundle grams
always prepared for a rumble man
casualties casually got puzzled hands
^^^^^^^^^I'm diggin' the beginnin'

honestly I like on topic Amby instead of off on a different topic
this piece really came off sick, I'm diggin' what you sayin' bruh
plus the piece has such a real message, keep doin' you my dude! I'm feelin' it!
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