Lawgix vs. Deaf Shady

[Lawgix]

Rules:

10 Bars MAX!!!!! No Less No More
House Rules Apply
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
check in due 24 hours hours prior to battle

consider this my check in....

[deafshady]

CHECK IN FAMOUS LAWGIX


Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Deaf, and cant see that your punches are old n played
You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage
Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking
I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole
Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout

[Lawgix]

i give u props for showin but ya secret *shh* i'll let it out
this faggot guzzles up cum just to "wet his mouth"

consider this a fight night the UFC better pay me
i'ma rename my upper cut call it "deaf to shady" (death to shady)

bet hes tryin to look at the earth while its still rotating
hes stupid the way he types is screamin "Sylvan take me!!!" (the kid can't type)

he half asses his sentences like he does his verses
you don't make cents plus ya common sense is worthless

always postin up shit but with the words he mentions,
makes it so that the beat is only worth the listen!

i'ma hurt this kittens pride so bad that it now fits
when i say that his demo wouldn't even make the "Meow Mix"

i'm hittin with him verbal punches with a loud fist
he be thinkin this shit is real hes sayin "Stop Ow SHIT!"

welcome to my high school see how La treats clowns
fuck a shady this is my new show call it "Nerdy Beat Down"

murder rap key? that trash is garbage i'm heartless when
i tell u the only "ill mind" u have is ur half retarted

your pretty cocky with that 1 win but can u beat me? FORGET IT!
the only "spectacular feats" u perform are at the special olympics!!!!

[deafshady]

fucking yeah that line consider this a fight night the UFC better pay me
i'ma rename my upper cut call it "deaf to shady" (death to shady)
it really hit me hard on that n also the last verse fucking damn!!

[FlipSide]

Vote for law.... cuz of personals and flow...shady had some personals..but i didnt know what the fuck he was talkin bout... Law had that last line that was played..in my point of view at least.. but better strucure LOL at that meow mix line...shit wuz funny...dam i thin shady went hard on the personals..( i kno i said that already) but i think his verse lacked..structure
and wtf?

You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage

The second line ok..but wtf? it wont link with the first..

Vote LaWGiX

[Lawgix]

cool 1-0 me uppin keep votin!!!!

[Loon E Lou]

maaan. deaf, ur writtens come alot better than ur battles dawg. jus sumtn i noticed. lawgix shined a lil brighter on this particular battle. more punches, personals and everything else in my opinion.


i'ma hurt this kittens pride so bad that it now fits
when i say that his demo wouldn't even make the "Meow Mix"

this^

your pretty cocky with that 1 win but can u beat me? FORGET IT!
the only "spectacular feats" u perform are at the special olympics!!!!

as well as this^ were the only lines that stood out to me out of both verses.

so all in all. my vote would go to LAWGIX.

[NoVeL]

Voting On A Scale 1 Thru 10, Above 10 Counts As A Decent Drop

DeafShady This Was A Catsweep, My Vote Goes 2 Lawgix n Hears Why...

Deafshady

Creativity is lacking, you ask for votes so yeah, you hella swayed
Maybe its heard being Deaf, and cant see that your punches are old n played

Creativity? Whoa Whoa Whoa There Buddy.. Your Swinging At Me & I Ain't Even Do Anything. Nothing Decent Here, No Punches No Personals Nothing.. Not 2 Mention This Was Your Opener! 0/10

You’re spineless, gutless, hair on ya lip, doctors nair the shyt
Now your only appointment for the day, is on the net, killing your Herritage

Huh? 4 The Attempt I'd Say 1/10

Weakest in the crew, you getting them screwed, Mime don’t know what he’s thinking
If he’s NOT tryin to shake up any competition, he must see your lame ass is tweaking

Huh? I Don't Understand.. Explain The Punch Here 0/10

I retired from FL cause of noobs like you, now voting is out of control
U must get paid every time you vote……. the way it gets stripped from the pole

If Your Comparing Bush in Politics 2 Illest's Voting System Then Yeah.. I See The Punch n Gotta Agree It's Kinda Funny 5/10


Sorry to put you on blast little fella, put it’s a crime if I don’t point it out
True love is really hard to Fine….so he decide to join a Mime and a Trout

eh? I Dont Understand The Punch & This Was Your Closer!!

0/10

Total Of 6/10 & Its Only 5 Bars Where Is The Rest of The Drop? 2 Lines = 1 Bar

Lawgix

i give u props for showin but ya secret *shh* i'll let it out
this faggot guzzles up cum just to "wet his mouth"

Nice Opener, Though Played 4/10

consider this a fight night the UFC better pay me
i'ma rename my upper cut call it "deaf to shady" (death to shady)

Perfect Example of A Personal n Wordplay 5/10

bet hes tryin to look at the earth while its still rotating
hes stupid the way he types is screamin "Sylvan take me!!!" (the kid can't type)

Didn't Really Hit me, Even Though I Caught The Punch!!
3.5/10

he half asses his sentences like he does his verses
you don't make cents plus ya common sense is worthless

Lol, See He's Probably Referring 2 Your Previous Battles.. Gives Him The Advantage Along With Personals
7/10

always postin up shit but with the words he mentions,
makes it so that the beat is only worth the listen!

Meh.. Law Kinda Went Soft On You Here! 2/10

i'ma hurt this kittens pride so bad that it now fits
when i say that his demo wouldn't even make the "Meow Mix"

Corny Punch 1.5/10

i'm hittin with him verbal punches with a loud fist
he be thinkin this shit is real hes sayin "Stop Ow SHIT!"

Lmaooooooo 5/10

welcome to my high school see how La treats clowns
fuck a shady this is my new show call it "Nerdy Beat Down"

Okay Never Been 2 His School Or L.A. But Again Another Punch 4/10

murder rap key? that trash is garbage i'm heartless when
i tell u the only "ill mind" u have is ur half retarted

The Most Memorable Part Of His Drop n It Was HELLA FUNNY
8/10

your pretty cocky with that 1 win but can u beat me? FORGET IT!
the only "spectacular feats" u perform are at the special olympics!!!!

Decent Closer 7/10
Total 47/10 ABOVE DECENT DROP

Deafshady Not A Bad Attempt But You Have Way More Work 2 Do In Your Punches, Multis, Personals etc.. Keep At It Kid!!

[MOEstradamus]

3-0 to lawgix yo deaf shady you are gettin there but you went up against a vet good try tho keep improven dont get down on yourself cuz lawgix has been at this for a while bro stay up

[Lawgix]

word good battle young grass hopper

-battle closed records updated-