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Dead Man

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I seen this dead man walkin down the street
You could hear out his head phones knockin to a beat
But my spirit won't let go talkin in my sleep
Got me feelin like a dead man walkin down the street

Facin trouble so clear
Faced the devil no fear
Tryna reach anotha level, no bezzles no beer
Feel success so close and I'm steppin so near
But I'm driftin like a ghost hearin whispers in my ear
I could smoke a fat blunt make it all disappear
I've been sober for a month longest break in four years
I was drivin eyes closed no chains, no gears
Put the throttle to the flo' while it rains, don't steer
I just bottled up my pain actin like I don't care
Take a bottle to the brain till my body ain't there
Demons hollerin my name, dreams swallowed down the drain
And you'd prolly do the same in one year felt like I lost everything
So hollow, no longer a role model... cause my brother turned six
And who else he gotta follow, but a dead man walkin down the street

You could hear out his head phones knockin to a beat
But my spirit won't let go talkin in my sleep
Got me feelin like a dead man walkin down the street
Like a dead man walkin down the street
Got me feelin like a dead man walkin down the street

I don't even know my name, no
Life is so painful
No one plays nice, but... that's just how the game goes
Tryna live it right but I'm seein no angels
Tryna live it right but.. look, look
I'm sick of livin in my head
Barely gettin out of bed
My mind cluttered, but this beat is like the butter to my bread
I either make it to the top or drop dead to the gutter instead
I never really heard what my mother said
I freestyle with the best, and never stutter with the leg
Cause when I write the right thoughts they get stuck inside the back of ya head
In fact I'm dead already
Rappin like it's mom's spaghetti
The weight lifted, but damn that piano's heavy
My man's gifted, thank God that he lets me
Ice his beats, call me Lil Wayne Gretsky
Righteous with my knowledge in politics I'm a lefty
Fresher than commercials, double pits to chesty
I could be the best but understand that God tests me
Learn to be a man but then the blue and whites arrest me
Askin how I feel? I feel like everybody left me
Lookin for the real while I'm travelin the west

Seen this dead man walkin down the street
You could hear out his head phones knockin to a beat
But my spirit won't let go talkin in my sleep
Got me feelin like a dead man walkin down the street
I don't even know my name, no
Life is so painful
No one plays nice, but... that's just how the game goes
Tryna live it right but I'm seein no angels
Tryna live it right but.. look, look

Seen this dead man walkin down the street
You could hear out his head phones knockin to a beat
But my spirit won't let go talkin in my sleep
Got me feelin like a dead man walkin down the street
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Re: Dead Man

Post by QwarterZ »

man fuck this.......you need to record this track
very sick, the visuals in the first verse were nice
the style reminds me of someone, I don't know who
but it's there, very sick piece man, can't believe it got slept on
keep writing man!
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