FlipSide vs. Lawgix

[Lawgix]

okiedoke

just 5 bars...
give ya iuno 72 hours to drop
24 to check in
House Rules apply
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO

this be my checkity check in!!!

[FlipSide]

check

-- Fri Jun 04, 2010 11:47 am --

O well here goes nothing

Sell out kid the only way u sick is standing next to plex..follower
theres sharks in the water keep ya mind shallower.. time borrower

Listen to ur beats ta feel horror, this skill? then the souf won game over...
Collab for what u wack and threw dust on tracks made by Untouched steps

man you tough like gator skin but after its cut like You should have been
online too much..i bet the mattres stuffed cuz he dont log off enough ta get a nut

U a mod..musta regressed cuz lawgix in a reflex is put out of ur context
Not to mention u bomb text n all of it should go in distilled subjects

A staple of illest but dies of his own sickness..defiance right u were the weakest
If it failed..ur skillz imprisioned chained gang ta snap ur unproper linkage

audio head? ur voice dead similiar ta slim so why dont u fade like him
Idolizing bitch ur styles broke down like a nick go find your self a kim

[Lawgix]

watch me turn tricks on flip like im flippin pancakes
he'd be thinkin of so many words he'd prolly get a hand ache

open him up like an abrasion n seal it tight with a band aid
like he was cut from lead singer n promoted to be the "bands aid"

like damn!!! whatta bad "flip of events" i'm flippin this kid the
finger while i'm flippin his sis! oh... flips gettin pissed!!!

hes transformin himself every hour... bi polar
i'm spittin electric while hes gettin his power "by solar"

"flip ya lips" again n i'll upper cut ya right molar
i'm flippin the script on his "sexuality" call him Ann Pohler!!!!

i told "her" five bars but u went over the limits
like when u sell urself on audios i'm "over ya gimmicks" this poser is finished!!!

nothin personal bruh haha

[NoVeL]

Voting Scale Consists From 1-10, Score Above 30 is Considered A Decent Drop

Sell out kid the only way u sick is standing next to plex..follower
theres sharks in the water keep ya mind shallower.. time borrower

Huh? 0/10

Listen to ur beats ta feel horror, this skill? then the souf won game over...
Collab for what u wack and threw dust on tracks made by Untouched steps

I Didn't Understand The Punch 2/10 4 Effort

man you tough like gator skin but after its cut like You should have been
online too much..i bet the mattres stuffed cuz he dont log off enough ta get a nut

Ha Ha.. Decent 5/10

U a mod..musta regressed cuz lawgix in a reflex is put out of ur context
Not to mention u bomb text n all of it should go in distilled subjects

Ouch.. Could Have Swung Harder 6/10

A staple of illest but dies of his own sickness..defiance right u were the weakest
If it failed..ur skillz imprisioned chained gang ta snap ur unproper linkage

Decent Punch 8/10

audio head? ur voice dead similiar ta slim so why dont u fade like him
Idolizing bitch ur styles broke down like a nick go find your self a kim

Laughable 4/10

Score: 25 Not Bad Flip It Was Pretty Decent Just Needa Make Your Punches Stand Out More! Most of em Didn't Hit The Target n Half The Time I Didn't Understand What You Were Talking About.

watch me turn tricks on flip like im flippin pancakes
he'd be thinkin of so many words he'd prolly get a hand ache

ehem.. Warming Up 2/10

open him up like an abrasion n seal it tight with a band aid
like he was cut from lead singer n promoted to be the "bands aid"

Funny I Like 4/10

like damn!!! whatta bad "flip of events" i'm flippin this kid the
finger while i'm flippin his sis! oh... flips gettin pissed!!!

Best Part of The Drop 8/10

hes transformin himself every hour... bi polar
i'm spittin electric while hes gettin his power "by solar"

Cool But Could Have Been Worded 2 A Better Punch 5/10

"flip ya lips" again n i'll upper cut ya right molar
i'm flippin the script on his "sexuality" call him Ann Pohler!!!!

ROFL 8/10

i told "her" five bars but u went over the limits
like when u sell urself on audios i'm "over ya gimmicks" this poser is finished!!!

Decent Closer 6/10

Score: 33 Nice Drop Lawgix, You Took it Easy On Him. Only Critique I Have Is Work on Ya Opening Punches, They Seem 2 Sway The Tide of Battle 2 Ur Advantage Most of The Time!!

My Vote Lawgix!! Case Closed

[Absolute]

Yeah flip, you dont seem like a battlin type.more of a written type.Which is cool. Law gets my vote, cat sweep. But LAW aint win the battle, Flip just lost.JMO

[Lawgix]

2-0 uppin lets keep it goin!!!!

[JDR]

Vote = Lawgix. Had more personals. Liked Flips flow on this tho. If you need more breakdown, lemme know.

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[Lawgix]

can u give some more critque break down???

[FlipSide]

Yea i need the critique

[Absolute]

Wordplay-LAW (mainly due to his name play)
Punchlines-LAW (Flip you have to learn to effectively use every bar you get. Make sure every line is aimed at your opponent. Being able to rhyme is an expectation, take your craft further and give it some focus, namely your opponent.)
Vocab- Flip, slightly
Multis-Tie
Style- LAW (both need to improve here, but law had a battle style whereas flip had more of a freestyle feel)
Creativity-LAW (flip your creativity wasnt too far behind, but again, youre here to battle, utilize that)
Flow-Flip

Best Bar vs Bar

Flip -

U a mod..musta regressed cuz lawgix in a reflex is put out of ur context
Not to mention u bomb text n all of it should go in distilled subjects

I liked this personal. You should strive to make all your bars contain material like this. Not a great punch but you had a nice combo of personals, multis, amd entertainment.

Law

hes transformin himself every hour... bi polar
i'm spittin electric while hes gettin his power "by solar"

Not as traditionally effective as your namew flip bar previous to this one, but I chose this because it sounds like somethin i'd say just goofin around. It really displays your creativity whilst simultaneously drawing a comparison between yourself and opponent. Nice.

Overall, Flip took 1-2 cats max. He was just outmatched.That being said, it takes a loss to earn a win. Ive lost way more than yall ever have.

[FlipSide]

thanks for the break down

[Lawgix]

thanx for the break down Absolute now if we could get Jack to explain i can close this... good battle flip!!!

[FlipSide]

L taken on the chin with my head high...thanks law...close it

[Lawgix]

okie doke... good battle flip!!!!

-battle closed records updated-