Nemesis Part 2: Nothin Personal, Just Business

[Momeijah]

Ok Whatever i Wrote Like 1/3 Of This Sober, 1/3 High And The Last 1/3 Drunk Like 5 Mins Ago So Yeah Pay Attention To The Name And BlaBlaBla im Too impatient To Perfect it So Suck it. And Btw ill Return All Feed.


im Unstable, if u Know Me Then u Know-it's-For-Certain ..||
ill Kidnap ur Bitch And Make Her Take My Pole-in-Her-Curtains ..||
Yo Kurse, i Ain't Miilz So i Won't Bother u With Daughter-Lines ..||
But When He Left What The Fuck Was Goin Through ur Father's-Mind ? ..||
ur Mom's a Fuckin MILF, i Mean it u Should Be Proud ..||
Baby Shake That Rump-Around, Get Down And Dry Hump-The-Ground ..||
So u Know These Next Lines Won't Give u Peace-in-ur-Head ..||
Cause i Thought Em Up While i Was Tryin To Sleep-in-My-Bed ..||
But SON i Won't Do Nothin Sleazy, Not at Least-Till-We're-Wed ..||
So For Now ill Just Take Her Out For Some Pizza-instead ..||
Spot Some Teen Hos, Leave The Scene To Get One To Blow-Me ..||
Fuck The Other 3, Smoke-Green Then OD On Codeine ..||
They Know-Me, im The Flyest-Dude, High-And-Screwed ..||
Write a Book On How To Write a Crude Line Or Two And Sign-it-Too ..||
i Type-Badass-Flows, To Fight-Past-My-Foes ..||
Ruckus Don't Record Cause He Can't Get The Mic-Past-His-Nose ..||
Pick Double FL Off The Street, Make Her Share a Tub-With-Me ..||
Give Her Some Cash To Go Up 40 Sizes To a Double-D ..||
Nah Fuck it Only Nerds Like u Pay u Got No-Luck ..||
Had More 'Asses in The Air' Than a Goddamn Tow-Truck ..||
i Forced a Jehovah's Witness To Suck-My-Dick ..||
And if i Had a Parrot it Would Say Some Fucked-Up-Shit ..||
See im a Heathen Believe Me it Ain't Jesus-That-Sent-Me ..||
Been in a Heated Frenzy Since ScottJames Cheated-Against-Me ..||
it Keeps-Me-Strong, And He Knows it's a Way Before He-Sees-Dom ..||
ill Smack Him With The Steel Chair He Sits at His PC-On ..||
Fuck These Clowns Hazard Did u Spend The Year On Ramadan ? ..||
And is Petrafyne Officer Farva Wearin Pajama-Pants ? ..||
u Dicks Ain't Smart Enough To Handle My Fuckin-Spits ..||
That'll 'Blow ur Head' Like Slutty Chicks Who Only Suck-The-Tip ..||
Fuck This Circus u Bitches Ain't Worth My Spits-And-My-Verses ..||
Where's The Feuds That Fuckin Made u Drop ur Shit-With-a-Purpose ..||
it Really Does Make Me Laugh That u Fools Are Seen-as-important ..||
Rell And i Are Rocks n Austins Y'all Are Cenas-And-Ortons ..||
i Take So Long Between Verses u Class Each One as a Comeback ..||
My Last Drop ? Pretend it's Been a Week Since ive Done-That ..||
Who Thinks EkomS Got a Life ? He's Now Nothin On illestlyrics ..||
No Buzz, Even Viral's Satellite Ears Can't Hear-it ..||
Jesus in The Black Market, a Human Mart-Full-Of-Hash ..||
That's Garbage, All He's Pushin is a Cart-Full-Of-Trash ..||
Nothin Personal...

[FlipSide]

Dude................ U smashed a couple dudes...

[- Mutual -]

yeah Dom you ripped on many people here, if Kurse reads that line he may flip a lil haha or it might not bother him, the flow on this was pretty consistent, the mutlies were way above par on the whole piece

Fuck This Circus u Bitches Ain't Worth My Spits-And-My-Verses ..||
Where's The Feuds That Fuckin Made u Drop ur Shit-With-a-Purpose ..||
it Really Does Make Me Laugh That u Fools Are Seen-as-important ..||
Rell And i Are Rocks n Austins Y'all Are Cenas-And-Ortons ..||
i Take So Long Between Verses u Class Each One as a Comeback ..||
My Last Drop ? Pretend it's Been a Week Since ive Done-That ..||

that was completely dope part but the whole drop was nice overall and that Ruckus line was funny as hell, good drop Dom keep that shit comin

[QwarterZ]

This was purdy sick I'll admit, very sick flow
some funny ass punches sick metaphors, and you kept me interested
very nice write,

See im a Heathen Believe Me it Ain't Jesus-That-Sent-Me ..||
Been in a Heated Frenzy Since ScottJames Cheated-Against-Me ..||
it Keeps-Me-Strong, And He Knows it's a Way Before He-Sees-Dom ..||
ill Smack Him With The Steel Chair He Sits at His PC-On ..||
Fuck These Clowns Hazard Did u Spend The Year On Ramadan ? ..

purdy sick flow right there...keep writing

[complexity]

Ok Whatever i Wrote Like 1/3 Of This Sober, 1/3 High And The Last 1/3 Drunk Like 5 Mins Ago So Yeah Pay Attention To The Name And BlaBlaBla im Too impatient To Perfect it So Suck it. And Btw ill Return All Feed.


im Unstable, if u Know Me Then u Know-it's-For-Certain ..||
ill Kidnap ur Bitch And Make Her Take My Pole-in-Her-Curtains ..||
Yo Kurse, i Ain't Miilz So i Won't Bother u With Daughter-Lines ..||
But When He Left What The Fuck Was Goin Through ur Father's-Mind ? ..||
ur Mom's a Fuckin MILF, i Mean it u Should Be Proud ..||
Baby Shake That Rump-Around, Get Down And Dry Hump-The-Ground ..||

[Alright. Not too impressive, barring the flow]

So u Know These Next Lines Won't Give u Peace-in-ur-Head ..||
Cause i Thought Em Up While i Was Tryin To Sleep-in-My-Bed ..||
But SON i Won't Do Nothin Sleazy, Not at Least-Till-We're-Wed ..||
So For Now ill Just Take Her Out For Some Pizza-instead ..||

[Not bad]

Spot Some Teen Hos, Leave The Scene To Get One To Blow-Me ..||
Fuck The Other 3, Smoke-Green Then OD On Codeine ..||
They Know-Me, im The Flyest-Dude, High-And-Screwed ..||
Write a Book On How To Write a Crude Line Or Two And Sign-it-Too ..||

[This is better]

i Type-Badass-Flows, To Fight-Past-My-Foes ..||
Ruckus Don't Record Cause He Can't Get The Mic-Past-His-Nose ..||
Pick Double FL Off The Street, Make Her Share a Tub-With-Me ..||
Give Her Some Cash To Go Up 40 Sizes To a Double-D ..||

[That's funny]

Nah Fuck it Only Nerds Like u Pay u Got No-Luck ..||
Had More 'Asses in The Air' Than a Goddamn Tow-Truck ..||
i Forced a Jehovah's Witness To Suck-My-Dick ..||
And if i Had a Parrot it Would Say Some Fucked-Up-Shit ..||

[If I had a parrot...lmao]

See im a Heathen Believe Me it Ain't Jesus-That-Sent-Me ..||
Been in a Heated Frenzy Since ScottJames Cheated-Against-Me ..||
it Keeps-Me-Strong, And He Knows it's a Way Before He-Sees-Dom ..||
ill Smack Him With The Steel Chair He Sits at His PC-On ..||

[Dom's becoming aggressive]

Fuck These Clowns Hazard Did u Spend The Year On Ramadan ? ..||
And is Petrafyne Officer Farva Wearin Pajama-Pants ? ..||

[We are the new english, not the old faggot one]

u Dicks Ain't Smart Enough To Handle My Fuckin-Spits ..||
That'll 'Blow ur Head' Like Slutty Chicks Who Only Suck-The-Tip ..||
Fuck This Circus u Bitches Ain't Worth My Spits-And-My-Verses ..||
Where's The Feuds That Fuckin Made u Drop ur Shit-With-a-Purpose ..||
it Really Does Make Me Laugh That u Fools Are Seen-as-important ..||
Rell And i Are Rocks n Austins Y'all Are Cenas-And-Ortons ..||

[Good wrestling reference]

i Take So Long Between Verses u Class Each One as a Comeback ..||
My Last Drop ? Pretend it's Been a Week Since ive Done-That ..||
Who Thinks EkomS Got a Life ? He's Now Nothin On illestlyrics ..||
No Buzz, Even Viral's Satellite Ears Can't Hear-it ..||

[That gets 10/10 just for the term satellite ears]

Jesus in The Black Market, a Human Mart-Full-Of-Hash ..||
That's Garbage, All He's Pushin is a Cart-Full-Of-Trash ..||

[Good one]

Nothin Personal...

Entertaining, brought the jokes that we all expect from you. Not the kind of drop that we are use to seeing around here, less serious, but still some fire. The only thing that was missing from this drop, obviously was the strong punchlines, though there were a few.

[Glamtrash]

You know what I think faggot. Good show etc. But I don't want bigger tits ty, they'll just get in the way and I'll fall off ladders n shit.

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[complexity]

You know what I think faggot. Good show etc. But I don't want bigger tits ty, they'll just get in the way and I'll fall off ladders n shit.

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Big tits are overrated.

[Glamtrash]

They tend to be all veiny n shit, and that's fkn gross.

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[The Gonz]

Lol ok ok, nice jab. Overall, some funny shit with great flow and solid jokes and punches. Parrot line had me chuckling the most. Good shit, nice comeback piece lol

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[Kurse]

I thought the whole thing was funny haha ...i was gonna say the same as Plex, the typical "Domino humor" was there, but it wasn't his typical flow and structure that he's known for. But I dig the change. lol

[DaPrince]

This was real sick bro. The three lines that stood out the most have already been quoted above (parrot line, steel chair, shit-with-a-purpose). I thought the lines around those, leading to and after them were great. Definitely wanna see more from you.