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DaPrince
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My life's tumultuous, full of ups, I've told you this
but under thunder I have wandered seen the coldest winters shift.
Every storm that forms a rift only reforms my motives quick,
and since I've known horrendous trips now I'll unfold tremendous wit.
Since the oldeset winner quit I've lived and strived for the best
so every line of my text, must be divine til my death.
I'm always climbing, no rest, and if I'm finding a threat
then rhymes intertwined like a vex will leave you blind and perplexed.
My lining's complex like regressions formed of y on x
what I write implies I'm blessed, so recording signed's my quest.
Ripped and chiseled my skills with mental P90x
and you'd get carpal tunnel tryin' to funnel the ill from my text.
Last edited by DaPrince on Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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Re: My Perspective

Post by FlipSide »

Every storm that forms a rift only reforms my motives quick,
and since I've known horrendous trips now I'll unfold tremendous wit.
Nice flow... nice imagery on first line
Since the oldeset winner quit I've lived and strived for the best
so every line of my text, must be divine til my death.
This is just hotness
BANG BANG!!!! I Shot U Down
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Re: My Perspective

Post by QwarterZ »

This was purdy cool, at first I didn't know who you was
so I was like whaaaaaat, but then I found out, either way
nice drop, very cool flow, nice piece, keep writing my dude!
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