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How It Ends - Messiah & Flipside

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Messiah/Mutual
Could You Comprehend Aberration Which Appeases The Mind
Your Alacrity Means It Kills You Inside Diseases With Lines
Ceases The Rhymes Require Justice So Brief With Design
Increased With The Crimes To Connive Decieve And Collide
Show Deferential And Fabricate Empathy With Forsaken Lyrics
My Favoured Spirits Impeccable Lurid Mistaken You Fear It
A Maverick Lonesome Meticulous With My Work
The Nadir Of My Day Is Higher To Novices With No Spurrs
If You Appear Oblivious To My Rage Of Imitation
Perusal Examinations A Rife Of Their Sanitation
A Mouth Full But I Coerce These Words Into My Song
Cumulative Explosions Occur Know That I'm Never Wrong
Show Compassion How Can You Be So Apathetic
Thats Pathetic That You Let It Digest IntoYour Credit
I Commemorate Disgression And Enhance My Pride
One Glance Inside Enervate Whilst I Dance My Cries

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Flipside
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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: How It Ends - Messiah & Flipside

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FINALLY U RAP RIGHT!!!! wow... it was a rushed Mutual but i'm just glad u stayed on time with it n didn't rap over the hook... lol... Flip... ur verse was dope man... but you need to move ur mic to a treated room cuz it sounds like ur spittin in a bathroom or kitchen... treat ur room right by puttin up sound barriers... as for the song... lyrically was good... mixed okay... not sayin that cuz i didn't mix it just sayin it was mixed okay... don't get it twisted... but it was worth the listen... dope drop guys...
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Re: How It Ends - Messiah & Flipside

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damn i definetly gotta hear this when i get the chance.
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thanks for the feed Lawgix, much appreciated
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: How It Ends - Messiah & Flipside

Post by FlipSide »

Word i feel what u saying lawgix... imma start working on that as soon as i get the time... i was recording it and noticed the echo...but it should be an easy fix since i have a dedicated studio room now... and thanks for the feed its appreciated and thanks for the help as well bro...
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Re: How It Ends - Messiah & Flipside

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Purdy dope track guys, did your thing
Mutual did a purdy good job, nice flow
Flip was cool, sound quality was off
but either way it was a good collab! keep writing
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Dude you got lyric talent man, at times if the lyrics werent posted it would have been hard to hear you but you dropped it man, the hook is tight, i like it, the 2nd verse did his thing, sounded good, lyrics good, over all good track.
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thanks for the feed QZ & Deciple, where'd you dissappear to man?
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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i moved and i lost my internet and everything, but now im back rolling dude, glad to be back, lost my studio cuz they went outta state but now im working on getting my own, soon enough i will be putting out more tracks and everything...
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: How It Ends - Messiah & Flipside

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Thanks TOYH Definitely appreciated
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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