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young_jobe
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Hail Mary

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[Chorus]
Come with me, Hail Mary
Run quick see, what do we have here
Now, do you wanna ride or die
La dadada, la la la la (x 2)

[V 1]
It's better to rule Hell, than to serve in Heaven
Life has learnin' lessons
Death is not really worth in stressin'
Picture a mournin' man, clothes torn in strands
Cross the belly of the foreign land
Bow down to rise up, before him stands
Stories mentioned About the Holy spirit
Feared and worried, but they are only lyrics
Bitch this aint so motherfucking singin' or rap
I'm speakin' on facts
I held my peace and never spoke
This be the real truest shit I ever wrote
Mystery where people wonder
Beneath it all, evil's under
These souls lurk, stuck as a dark fadin' mirage
As I'm prayin to God
Here come my foes, Gun sized five-fo's
Two took in his spine, he paralyzed die slow
Flee the city, with my girl
It's nobody in this live world, only just seen with you and I
Evil fiends on every single human mind
Whom want me dead and crucified
This song, is to my dear mom
Incase she's checks when I'm still gone
Find the rap game, eerrily blatent
Is this corrupted shit, we're seriously faced with
Asking you, please find me God
And leave the rest behind, dont prive me off

[C]

[V 2]
Blowed, and this dry weed got me bleeding in tears
This hardcore shit, no nigga singing in here
My brain is twisted
And insane and wicked
I cant find something to do
Niggaz said, "How bout blow your brains, out cause you got nothing to lose"
Nobody knows that I'm feeling this way
I cant believe I'm concealing this pain
Mouth closed, eyes opened
Feeling like life hopeless
Causcious of somebody trying to fuckin' snipe me
Paranoid whom this bitch might be
Focused on the glock next to me
Others say I'm probally trippin' off the ecstacy
Institutionalized and traumatized
In fear that I'm gonna die
Picture me insane
God please take away the misery and hate
All you hearing is pain
But every thing was wobbled in, and started falling down
I'm a searching lost soul that's calling out
While I'm seeing demons in my eyes
Even when I die
Before I die I still see, no liberty, no justice, and no equality
Government reap and sew evil seeds
So tell me what these people see?
They see nothing but deceitful deeds
But most to say
My soul searchin', so I just hope and pray
That God dont close his gates

[C]
Last edited by young_jobe on Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:35 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Hail Mary

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Wow, since I read this n I hit on my pad n just want to add on my verse to ur 3rd verse....

[V 3]
I'm a soldier as you kno as the world gettin colder,
hands em all hater off my shoulder, cuz my start's on the mission,
my eyes keep it whole wide vision,
enemies is on the heat, I hold the guard on my position,
so listen,
better get the fuck away be4 make up the wrong decision,
get this, my emotion's ignition,
bout to explode it out wit the greatest ambition,
nigga be judgin or hatin, Im on my wait,
Till I split the illest shyt into bullets n make em straight,
I could slate, even wit my weights,
dont try to push me wit the crime rate,
Playa got it all waste, cut the chase,
Muthafucka gonna split out in their face,
I still take it strong as I build even we finna to get kill,
soon as ya kno, we'll come back wit somethin ill,
talkin down, take a look around,
Only kno God can judge, quit ur holdin grudge,
rather ride or die, ya still be dead on the first when time goes by,
no question why,
Cuz Hail Mary's on the way to pay the price,
[Chorus]

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Re: Hail Mary

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not bad..
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Re: Hail Mary

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what the fuck? we got a biter's communion going on on this site now?
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