shady 08 vs the oddz

[ODDZ313]

48 hr response

My flow will verbally strangle ya, surgically re-arainging ya,
floating back to romania, your game is like transylvania primitive,(80's nintendo game), you fucking idiot. dat pic looks chilly as a witch's tit n your dressed like a freezing inuit immigrant.

Bars you cant count dracula, sniffn daddy's nuts to get eminem's nasal vernacular. i'm spectacular, deadly like red back tarantulas, poison darts pin-pointed, leave your limbs disjointed. your mom says your " a degenerate, dick head, disappointment."

Shady 08, leave you degraded and raped,in your dirty hoody taking logs back to the fire place were your dad awaits to give you ass rape, while your jacking off to eros face, that you seen on myspace.

This kid looks like he belong on the save the children network, whats your sister net-worth, for me to get served? hey lil homie does she got a phat ass and lips like angelina jolie, tell pa i will trade him some old perogies and a couple of packs of baloney for that tenderoni (bobby brown word for a busto,lol)

You know what you best do, get out my way before you get bodied like cheashescu! (romanian dictator or dick taker)
Put you under a firing squad, hope that i retire my dogs like grand champs, i smack the ink of sis's tramp stamp, beat lil fucks that wanna rap with there back packs, make your kneck snap back like a head on collision you will be dead on arrival i will be surviving n chilling.

some miss spelled words, how am i supposed 2 remember how 2 spell that dick takers name.

[Shady_08]

With the three one three at the back O.D.D
You're even more of'a wanna be 8 mile than ME

I'll punch you for a straight mile this is 8 mile no' the city of Sin
This is a black and white movie, and the white boy'll win

Jack made fun of me cuz i've posted a comm'on'da wall for me
But damn homie, how stupid can he be? check this out, this nigga' has three
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/profile/ODDZ313/

You're da future, boy the future ends in 2.0.1.2
With a name like that oddz must be stacked against you


You're delusional son, couldn't beat me, even if i was a drum
Take a dictionary and stick to it, like a handfull of cum

[MOEstradamus]

dont sway

ok first off we have no rules or no bar limit and no voting rules sooooooooo.

oddz since this didnt have a limit i wont say anything but check your set up everyone of your bars looks like 2 so watch that in the future it looks like you have 7-10bars to shady's 5


My flow will verbally strangle ya, surgically re-arainging ya,
floating back to romania, your game is like transylvania primitive,(80's nintendo game), you fucking idiot. dat pic looks chilly as a witch's tit n your dressed like a freezing inuit immigrant.
his picture looks nothing like that lol but since i think you are talking of his old picture multis where off in places flow was good punch wasnt really good at all more of a dis 2/5
Bars you cant count dracula, sniffn daddy's nuts to get eminem's nasal vernacular. i'm spectacular, deadly like red back tarantulas, poison darts pin-pointed, leave your limbs disjointed. your mom says your " a degenerate, dick head, disappointment."
flow was choppy in some parts here didnt really like the punch and the count thing is playes as fuck 2/5
Shady 08, leave you degraded and raped,in your dirty hoody taking logs back to the fire place were your dad awaits to give you ass rape, while your jacking off to eros face, that you seen on myspace.
flow was a lil better multis where off again punch was weak 2/5
This kid looks like he belong on the save the children network, whats your sister net-worth, for me to get served? hey lil homie does she got a phat ass and lips like angelina jolie, tell pa i will trade him some old perogies and a couple of packs of baloney for that tenderoni (bobby brown word for a busto,lol)
flow again choppy in a couple spots at the begining i thought this was gona be nice but bro wtf is up with the sister thing that was weak a filler line does he even have a sister? 1/5
You know what you best do, get out my way before you get bodied like cheashescu! (romanian dictator or dick taker)
Put you under a firing squad, hope that i retire my dogs like grand champs, i smack the ink of sis's tramp stamp, beat lil fucks that wanna rap with there back packs, make your kneck snap back like a head on collision you will be dead on arrival i will be surviving n chilling.
and then idk what to say about this last line bro you didnt even really punch at all 1/5

total 8/25


With the three one three at the back O.D.D
You're even more of'a wanna be 8 mile than ME
ok well lets start im not gettin the first line 313 at the back of odd if your talkin about aimin a gun you fail cuz there is no 313 now then the punch was nice i liked it better then what you have used before flow was good 3/5
I'll punch you for a straight mile this is 8 mile no' the city of Sin
This is a black and white movie, and the white boy'll win
didnt like the first line repetitive and ok the punch was weak really wasnt even a punch at all 1/5
Jack made fun of me cuz i've posted a comm'on'da wall for me
But damn homie, how stupid can he be? check this out, this nigga' has three
profile/ODDZ313/
i see the personal but and the punch what you were goin for but ppl that are on there phone wont be able to see it so it was a waste and kinda pointless 2/5
You're da future, boy the future ends in 2.0.1.2
With a name like that oddz must be stacked against you
flow was off you missed a few words nice chance at name play but why are the oddz stacked against him you didnt really set it up you just threw it 1/5

You're delusional son, couldn't beat me, even if i was a drum
Take a dictionary and stick to it, like a handfull of cum
this was alright nothing to great here made me laugh a little bit 2/5

total 9/25

vote shady

both of you need to work on directing your punches at your opponent and not to diss to actually punch. but keep droppin you guys can get there

[Shady_08]

thanx Xtaci... i'll follow your advice


peace!

[MOEstradamus]

I don't even know what you talking bout on the rhyme scheme, he didnt say anything good. It was his old picture I was looking at. My bars are like 8. he had now multis and wasn't funny until the last line. All they eat in romania is sausage type food, they got a blend of medditeranian and eastern europe type polish food.oh ya and cheshescu was killed by a firing squad.
his first line does not get my name right and adds a whack rhyme, o-d-d is more of an 8 mile wanna be than me, nah. i will punch you for a str8ght mile? ya idk, u know a battle is not a song right. Yall looking at a different screen than I' am, he didn't make me mad, didn't really even make fun of me? He had 48 hrs to respond and this is how he came at me? lol. atleast what I said made people laugh at him. I respect the feed back, i just think what he said was primitive and weak.

i love this

i know you are dissin his last avatar and to be honest if its changed during a battle its a automatic DQ so a mod could DQ him for changing his avatar during a battle.... also im saying that your rhyme scheme is the same as mine was back in the day and i got points deducted becuz it was larger than the other opponents and it seemed almost unfair cuz i could fit more in bigger lines then someone else.... also it dont matter if you make some one laugh if it doesnt pertain to the battle to me then it dont count if i make a verse and i say a dumb joke like i sold my car for gas money that might make someone laugh but it has nothing to do with the battle then its just a filler. also your punches where way out there. the sister thing was weak does he even have a sister if he does then ill change that line... the beatin off to rugged face on myspace that is weak too dont get me wrong shady's verse was weak as fuck but he had a verse that was focused at you with everyline they where weak but in my eyes oddz your flow and multis where better but you really didnt have punches you had disses and on this site they are different

and no more swaying in this battle or someone will get a dq

[Shady_08]

i'm half white )

You're da future, boy the future ends in 2.0.1.2
With a name like that oddz must be stacked against you
flow was off you missed a few words nice chance at name play but why are the oddz stacked against him you didnt really set it up you just threw it 1/5

he left a comment on his own page and i quote "i'm the future"

[Lawgix]

sooo...

this was okay nothing spectacular... but heres how its goin down


Oddz

your verse was everywhere dude u got some work to do on STRUCTURE... wordplay... multies... but mainly fuckin structure i could hardly read ur verse man... you had some "alright" lines nothing off the wall...

"This kid looks like he belong on the save the children network, whats your sister net-worth, for me to get served" not the greatest but all i could find that was anywhere near decent

newayz

shady08...

your gettin a lil bit better with ur punches not quite elevated yet but gettin there... keep hittin Center Of Elevation up n just learn bro... had some okay lines again not decent but okay...

"With the three one three at the back O.D.D
You're even more of'a wanna be 8 mile than ME"

"You're da future, boy the future ends in 2.0.1.2
With a name like that oddz must be stacked against you"

only reason i picked this one is cuz it shows that ur tryin to word punches against ur opponent it worked but not as hard as it could have been...

i think my fav was...

"You're delusional son, couldn't beat me, even if i was a drum
Take a dictionary and stick to it, like a handfull of cum"

so my vote goes to Shady 08

-battle closed records updated-

AND DON'T FUCKING SWAY AGAIN!!!!!