Atheist

[Soulo]

Images of painted Heavens & Earth the world's the same
if I can't have faith in sketches there's no pearly gates
it's all investments; everybody has a price
you only live life through God for Paradise
what I'm writing's perfect so here's the final verdict
we pray for miracles but no replies are given
"faith's higher faculty" higher planes bind our essence
but look what happened to those who prayed on 9/11
religion's suicide if we living life believing in death
so in the end it's all just a placebo effect
but when all ends meet we feel hollow inside
take bites from the fruits of knowledge & swallow our pride
you so hell-bent on faith but expect your heaven
& messengers of God think they exempt from lessons
you pray with knees bent and closed eyes for religion
but you unaware cause closed eyes define our prison
they selling you out but you just buy a ticket
those who attend mass are sinners disguised as Christians
love Christ that's envy; the life you'd love to be
but to me just staying alive's considered luxury
nowadays it's sacred as sex to idolize the cross
& seek God so when you're dead you minimize the loss
this is deep as it gets; what I'm spitting you all divulge
I let the past go and grip what the future holds.

[complexity]

Very strong piece.

The topic was executed well, you don't astray from the original point. Rhyming was above average.

I thought the earlier part of the verse showed your lyrical skills best and towards the end you were a bit more passive while just adding bars in attempt to finish the written. Not literally unfolding a story as well as you did at the beginning. That's just an observation.

New idea, new idea..etc.

8.5/10

[Soulo]

Thanks, appreciate the feedback.