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Demented Genius

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A demonic heathen crafted from the mind of genius
The meanest donkey dickin rappers cause I’m fiendish
Delinquent dilated eyes wide evil thoughts are frequent
Replaced my horns to be reborn in the form of a phoenix
you squeamish of these puked flows but I’m not bulimic
I mean it when I say believe it I rip these call me Ripley’s
I’m sickly movin quickly Left for dead so I got swift feet
I’m tricky quick to deceive like a slave tryin to get free
been here so I spit heat tongue of silver shit its platinum
evilness is fathomed constantly dirty in bloody fashion
the action flowin shiny blows like chromed out magnums
this is passion cause the devil presses for sins of the fleshes
so im aggressive not to be messed with i'm tight wit the best scripts
majestic verbal athletics the foundation to the aesthetics
you get it I blow minds like suicides that’s not attempted
so I stay a demented eccentric with flows that are not rented
faced with the consequences I bust GOAT’s wit no incentives
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Re: Demented Genius

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eMCee Havic wrote: this is passion cause the devil presses for sins of the fleshes
so im aggressive not to be messed with i'm tight wit the best scripts
majestic verbal athletics the foundation to the aesthetics
you get it I blow minds like suicides that’s not attempted
so I stay a demented eccentric with flows that are not rented
faced with the consequences I bust GOAT’s wit no incentives
I really got into the piece at this point. The rest was slightly above mediocre to me.

Clean structure and good flow for the most part.

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Re: Demented Genius

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uppin this shit

-- Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:26 am --

uppin this shit
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I’m sickly movin quickly Left for dead so I got swift feet
I’m tricky quick to deceive like a slave tryin to get free
Dude...not only the word play but the flow was sick on this bar
this is passion cause the devil presses for sins of the fleshes
so im aggressive not to be messed with i'm tight wit the best scripts
majestic verbal athletics the foundation to the aesthetics
you get it I blow minds like suicides that’s not attempted
so I stay a demented eccentric with flows that are not rented
faced with the consequences I bust GOAT’s wit no incentives
That whole part right there was sickly... i enjoy the shit u drop..when u do drop.. good flow and metaphores as well... structure and everything else that people look for... i just enjoyed the read my dude....
Oh plex quoted the same part...smh.. and no i did not copy plexes quote
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Re: Demented Genius

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wow 2 feeds uppin
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