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Come on, guys. I know I've been gone for a minute, but when I come back I don't like seeing great drops being read 30 times with only 1 reply.

Ya'll are sleeping on some great shit.

How is anybody supposed to elevate with no constructive criticism or positive reinforcement? Even if you don't like the piece, say so, help that user grow to become better than they are.

Stop being selfish. Everyone wants feed on their own drops but aren't willing to give it back.
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Alpha Bill wrote:Come on, guys. I know I've been gone for a minute, but when I come back I don't like seeing great drops being read 30 times with only 1 reply.

Good Bar


Ya'll are sleeping on some great shit.

Solid, to the point....


How is anybody supposed to elevate with no constructive criticism or positive reinforcement? Even if you don't like the piece, say so, help that user grow to become better than they are.

Kinda stretched here....didn't really rhyme

Stop being selfish. Everyone wants feed on their own drops but aren't willing to give it back.

Played concept...coulda been flipped better, but I see where u were goin here though..


Overall, a decent drop I guess......Keep elevating. :)

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LMAO @ Crimson
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Thanks for this Bill. I'm feeling illestlyrics, and all that's going on here, but more feedback would be nice. I've dropped a couple audios that have got lots of feedback, and for those ones the feedback has given me real things to think about when I go about doing a final draft, while I have other pieces that haven't even received a single comment, thought they've been listened to by a handful of heads. And some of em I think are pretty damn dope, or at the very least unique with good rhythm and flow... such as:

Audios:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/cimme ... 18112.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/poeti ... 18151.html

Written:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/state ... 17956.html
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I agree with you Bill. I try to leave feed on a few pieces every few days or so, whenever I have the time, and it doesnt take very long to do so. I dropped a piece here awhile back, with a new type of style, just to see what everyone thought and so forth. Anyhow, that piece is now on the third or fourth page without a single response. Kind of disappointing when Ive put the time in to read AND feed as much as I can.


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