some new shit w/ precise, only showin my part tho

[Lawgix]

ay yo,
i'll leave u to burn,
like ashes in erns,
u said i haven't learned,
bitch i got what i earned,
pages have turned,
next page to turn,
new chapter in the making,
no longer is Lawgix fakin,
i'm here for the takin,
away like ur life that was taken,
the lines i'm creatin,
are lines ur yankin,
"yank" somethin else,
cause never come close to "spankin" me,
with precise on the beat,
we remain the elite,
team, reign supreme,
bulldozin over ur kingdom to be claimed as kings,
breakin things,
shatter ur pelvis in 21 microbits,
for callin us shit,
u'll leave with a lisp on ur lip,
remember this,
is the day u got ripped,
by Precise and Lawgix,
bitch we run this shit,
so suck a dick,
like eminem i'm "infinite"
the words i spit,
are ill-legit,
preform lyrical surgery,
we "tuck and nip",
startin shit,
will leave ur life altered quick,
to spark and ignite ur mind,
with lyrical rhymes,
light ur ass up,
we patriotic like the 4th of july,
this war is 2nite,
i'm the general of the this morbid fight,
leave ur morphed and psyched,
torn and shattered,
u've been verbally battered,
by the masters,
were faster than 22 on comin slackers,
leave u lackin with rap, ur slackers,
packin massive fire arms to attack ya,
providin the idigresive heat,
to leave u packin in packets by the fuckin green bay packers

yeah had to alter some of that shit lol made it all run together as well as i could hope u enjoy

[complexity]

This was cool. Seems like something you would spit really fast.
For Critism. Some bars were just like blah.

Uppin for more feedback.

[Lawgix]

thanx, can ya point out which bars were just "bleh"?

[complexity]

for callin us shit,
u'll leave with a lisp on ur lip,
remember this,
is the day u got ripped,
by Precise and Lawgix,
bitch we run this shit,
so suck a dick,
like eminem i'm "infinite"
the words i spit,
are ill-legit,
preform lyrical surgery,
we "tuck and nip",
startin shit,


No real substance there.

By the way I don't know how possible it is to have a lisp on your lip.

[Invincible]

By the way I don't know how possible it is to have a lisp on your lip.

Its was alright but it died quick