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Brand New Day

Post by drunken jesus »

melodramatic banger processed the piano a bit to give a sampled-esque sound and did the same to the strings & organ to a less dramatic extent

its on soundclick as well @ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... ID=9396292

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[soundclick]9396292[/soundclick]

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Re: Brand New Day

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This is smooth... The vibe is very laid back, but a kind of powerful laid back if you know what I mean. Like the kind of laid back where your not just relaxin' but thinkin about something important. I think it might benefit from having a few sections here and there where the drums pick up the pace a bit. The pace did pick up for a while a little after the 2 minute mark, and that was nice, and again towards the end, but I think a little pick up focused on percussion might be nice, even if only for 10 seconds at a time. It'd have to be done right though, and maybe it's not even necessary, I'm just thinkin that if I was to flow with it, a few percussion boosts to thrust the energy of the flow forward might make the power of the flow strike harder. If that makes sense...

By the way, I also really liked the victory march song you suggested I check out. I think that one stands very well on its own, but if the right kind of flow was matched with it, I think it could be incredible.
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Re: Brand New Day

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yeah would probably benefit with some additional percussion, some additional cymbals and toms maybe to add flavor to the rhythm section & yeah i been looking for the right mc for that other beat need somebody with a commanding presence and diverse flow who can switch tempos with ease which is a bit of a hard combo to find
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
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At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
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