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leeroi green
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my last drop

Post by leeroi green »

Now I already know that they gon hate when they read this
I guarantee that they'll be talking that shit

They dont want it rappin they know that i'm the last dragon thats why these fagots keep trying to ride on my dick

But I shake the haters off I call them cake cus they are soft
plus they probably got fruity feelings inside

They dont want to battle their faculty get dismantled they wont admit it cus they've got way to much pride

trust hip hop is in good hands I took an oath that i will stand
even if I've got to hold it on my back

I spit it this vicious with thee intentions to win against competition if any try to attack

cus I'm the peoples champ the title wont be given back
this belt will be on my waist when I'm in my grave

and my tombstone will read LEEROI the best of emcees yo he was definitely one of the greats

but as long as im breathing I promise i will keep reaching
out to my people to try and teach them the way

hey, lets go for a ride let me show you the light prepare yourselves for a show thats off the chain

see they gon hate and they gon lie and they'll despise you when you shine
but I promise you homies that aint the game

you just be true to you and do what you can do to bloom and if hip hop is ever in trouble i'll save the day

BE EASY ILLEST I'M OUT

HOOD ACADEMY
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Re: my last drop

Post by Haz »

Now I already know that they gon hate when they read this
I guarantee that they'll be talking that shit

ok

They dont want it rappin they know that i'm the last dragon thats why these fagots keep trying to ride on my dick

Not much Impact

But I shake the haters off I call them cake cus they are soft
plus they probably got fruity feelings inside

haha

They dont want to battle their faculty get dismantled they wont admit it cus they've got way to much pride

ok

trust hip hop is in good hands I took an oath that i will stand
even if I've got to hold it on my back

.

I spit it this vicious with thee intentions to win against competition if any try to attack

Nice

cus I'm the peoples champ the title wont be given back
this belt will be on my waist when I'm in my grave

lol

and my tombstone will read LEEROI the best of emcees yo he was definitely one of the greats

Alright

but as long as im breathing I promise i will keep reaching
out to my people to try and teach them the way

hey, lets go for a ride let me show you the light prepare yourselves for a show thats off the chain

Good flow, lyrics?

see they gon hate and they gon lie and they'll despise you when you shine
but I promise you homies that aint the game

Alright

you just be true to you and do what you can do to bloom and if hip hop is ever in trouble i'll save the day

cool finish.


This was good in the sense of a verse for the most part, You could of Came harder at points but thats just my opinion, other then that good shit keep dropping
but thats my opinion,
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