Word Playin

[lyrical1]

A hip hop advocate, rhyme-slaying activist/
Wit illness levels pass what addable on an abacus/
The anomaly of attic accidents by addicts to acid laced wit alkalide Logan couldn’t act against/
Need I, as usual, show what dopeness’ll do to you/
And outline my IVs by using roman numerals/
Due to the extent of my new pharmaceutical/ drug that, when writing, producing flames thru my cuticles?/
My flow is unbreakable, not even close to pliable/
Got Tony Stark jealous of the iron I’m provide you/
Thru microphone sparks only I make ignitable/
Cuz if you get too hyper you’ll need to take your Diatrol/
Lyrically lethal, spit rips insulin to bits of slit insolence gripped by impotence/
Unfit to be pit against this lyricist whose synonyms to viciousness are unlisted cuz they remain limitness/
Eighth human, eighth scorpion, fourth pre-historian/
Another fourth alien, the last one the orient/
Of rap styles made to be the galaxy's euphoriant/
So when the universe collapses, you’ll know who put the order in/

[QwarterZ]

this was pretty cool...more braggadocio which is cool..the words you threw out there is really what made this piece shine...I'd like to see you get a bit more slick with it next time the idea of this was dope though nice drop man keep doing you!

[ Post made via Mobile Device ]

[lyrical1]

i feel u, thx for the feedback

Like I say, I rhyme on this shit for metaphor purposes mainly, its not to be an asshole or nothin. Some cats be takin it too personal.

Good lookin out on the advice though Ill be checkin ur stuff out as I get time to cycle through the posts.