Last Dayz keystyle

[Audible Thought]

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2AWm0Uw3xJk[/video]

ain't got shit to prove but at times i got to
remind all you fucks bout the way i do
definition of a fuck up with a high iq
used to do nothin at all i was too scared to move
the pressure built up now i gotta let loose
for my fam, my true self its time to breakthrough
fight this shit live like its pay per view
im a new man today this aint no deja vu
they try to break you but i say fuck them
no matter if i try y'all will never comprehend
my deepest thoughts, if you reach em u will get cought
and dragged down to the level where i play this sport
raw to the core and i don't mean that im real
i mean that im alive and my soul is still here
grab a couple beers and have a talk with my pops
he the only one that knows that ur word is all u got
this stress won't stop even if you go pop
just do what you can leave the rest up to god
those words meant alot i cherish them in my heart
playing my part smile wide when it gets hard
assault the page, with the rage of a surpressed man
taking what i can the pans and cans of spam
run with a plan thats grand like am's understand
nothing promised on this promise land

[Quix]

ain't got shit to prove but at times i got to
remind all you fucks bout the way i do
definition of a fuck up with a high iq
used to do nothin at all i was too scared to move
the pressure built up now i gotta let loose
for my fam, my true self its time to breakthrough
fight this shit live like its pay per view
im a new man today this aint no deja vu


STARTED ILLL, ^ liked that shit right thur ^


fell off a bit near the end ... but a hella nice read!

they try to break you but i say fuck them
no matter if i try y'all will never comprehend
my deepest thoughts, if you reach em u will get cought
and dragged down to the level where i play this sport
raw to the core and i don't mean that im real

sounded a bit choppy to me ^ but i like the content there ^ just fix the flow up!



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[Kau the Lion]

For a keystyle this wasn't bad. Flow felt choppy in spots but nothing too bad. Content felt a little scattered at times. Not bad, all in all, though. Keep dropping.