Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Talk the Talk (1 verse&hook) *NeW2SiTe*pLeAsE rEaD! ! !

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
Duce2011
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 8
Joined: Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:49 pm
Location: ThA WeStSiDe

Talk the Talk (1 verse&hook) *NeW2SiTe*pLeAsE rEaD! ! !

Post by Duce2011 »

INCREDABLE, FLEXABLE, DISCHARGE! AS PROPANE
TANKS COVER THE FLOORING IN YOUR BACKYARD
KILL HUMANS AND DEVOUR THIER FLESH
SPILL BLOOD, WIPE IT ALL OVER MY CHEST
GET HIGH WITH THE PRINCE OF THE SKY
MAKE A MESS OF YA LIFE
EAT EYES TO TAKE SIGHT, OWNS THE NIGHT AND
BARES LIGHT, I TEAR
MUTHAFUCKAZ APART IN A FIST FIGHT
THERE'S NO TIME LEFT, YOUR TOO LATE
READING YOU YOUR LAST RIGHTS
AND DEATH IS ON THE WAY
DECAPATATED HEADS AND COMPRESSED BRAINS
THE TRUTH IS SOO REAL THAT
ITS TO FAKE FOR THE AIR WAVES
CATACOMBS AND CAVES
HOMOSEXUALS WRITE GAY POEMS
AS I KEEP IT REAL KIKIN IT WITH ALL
MY HOMIES AND BLAZE
LIVING OUT ALL OF OUR LAST DAYZ
UNTILL WE REACH THE END OF THE GAME
AND CANT PLAY
CONSIDER ME A CHILD CUZ I LUV 2 PLAY
SHOOT AN A.K.

-HOOK-

YOU CAN TALK THE TALK, BUT
CAN YOU WALK THE WALK?
SOME NIGGAZ ARE REAL AND
SOME NIGGAZ ARE NOT
YOU CAN TALK THE TALK, BUT
CAN YOU WALK THE WALK?
SOME NIGGAZ ARE REAL AND
SOME NIGGAZ ARE NOT
Duce[size=150][i][color=#BF0000][/color][/i][/size]
User avatar
Alvin
Sudonim Free
Offline
Posts: 1958
Joined: Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:09 am
Wins: 8
Losses: 3
No Shows: 1
Location: CA

Re: Talk the Talk (1 verse&hook) *NeW2SiTe*pLeAsE rEaD! ! !

Post by Alvin »

I read. Not impressed to be honest. The capital lettering method is meant for delivery, so im trying to be all aggressive with every word i read, for example: here is MY example, OKAY! anyways, i believe cussing is a lack of intelligence, but that's just me personally. Try adding some length to your bars. Welcome
Last edited by Alvin on Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
K KiLLaH
Rap King
Offline
Posts: 811
Joined: Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:38 am
Wins: 20
Losses: 5

Re: Talk the Talk (1 verse&hook) *NeW2SiTe*pLeAsE rEaD! ! !

Post by K KiLLaH »

damn take it easy on newcomers help them elevate ....you don't have to be nice...but you dont have to be a complete dick
User avatar
MonuMental
Hairy Scoundrel
Offline
Posts: 528
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:09 pm
Location: Leland, MS

Re: Talk the Talk (1 verse&hook) *NeW2SiTe*pLeAsE rEaD! ! !

Post by MonuMental »

I always like to see someone talkin that wicked shit. If it suits you, bruh, go for it. Just try to make sure you don't stray too far off topic and if possible to beef your bars up a bit so they carry more weight. The fact is you showed initiative to sit and write and post, that's all you need to progress. Stay up, bruh.
[center]Peel back the facade and behold a bold insanity,
With no repose or vanity, composed of inhumanity.[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Image[/center]
[center]Illest Awards For 2011:
Text MC of the Year- MonuMental
Class of 2011- MonuMental, Enlightend, 3rd String, CBK, and Pest
Writer of the Year- MonuMental
Written of the Year- MonuMental 'A Series of Unfortunate Events'[/center]

[center]a-series-of-unfortunate-events-vt23866.html[/center]
User avatar
Duce2011
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 8
Joined: Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:49 pm
Location: ThA WeStSiDe

Re: Talk the Talk (1 verse&hook) *NeW2SiTe*pLeAsE rEaD! ! !

Post by Duce2011 »

Yo, thakns for the posts every1. Thats real cool. That keystyle come a recorded written i made and wanted to see what ppl would say.
Duce[size=150][i][color=#BF0000][/color][/i][/size]
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Amazon [Bot] and 8 guests