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"Baby Steps"a lil some some for the ladies

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Greetings to illestlyrics !!! I have an aspiring hip hop group and im looking to network with other artists as well. check out some of our music!

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you might wanna go feed some posts if you want any on yours. jus sayin. welcome tho
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well, the hook is pretty nice. catchy an something you can vibe out to.
1st verse is cool. fits with flow an presence/delivery.. but he just doesn't sound into the song, and the lyrics don't really follow with the hook, imo. its kinda like a free verse type of feel to it.

2nd verse is nice. solid actually, nice presence/delivery and it works better with the hook.. an he seems cocky in a way, ya know. which fits the beat great..

not a bad track for what its about, ya know. not my kind of stuff, but i dig it. keep at it.
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i liked this shit man, good lyrics good swag, first verse gott me rocking and the others keep it going.. really not feeling the chorus tho.

good shit man

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