Remain's Freestyle

[Genesis]

Maybe this life aint as complicated as it seems/
Maybe you can live your life, Maybe even chase a dream/
But the path is a one way ticket down the Fuckin’ road/
Life aint got no reset button, So be careful where your toes go/
Im locked up in this solitude, No way of getting out the back/
I knew the minute that I stepped up in this bitch, it was trap/
But Smoke a blunt, Have a hit/
Take the chance, Capture it/
If a Nigga stands in ya way, proceed to fracture him/
In my life I’ve killed more people than the fuckin’ rapture bitch/
Im in a 4 way maze and I am feelin like im trapped in it/
The fact you think I give two shits what you think is just blasphemous/
Dont call me a preacher, just consider me an activist/
Im fighting for my rights to be a freely spoken lyricist/
NO MORE being held back by you people who cant handle this/
I bet you niggas never seen Remain rap with such strength like this/
So powerful I’ll make every fuckin rapper refrain to diss/
Kissed the bitch good bye/
Slit my wrist 2 fuckin’ times/
But not to deep so that I can feel the pain but not die/
Fuck this hard life/
I promised myself this would be the last time/
That I commited this crime of sin that continues to corrupt my mind/
I feel the demons as they crawl up my spine/
Nobodys caring when I’m crying/
Beggin please let me be free/
But nobody seems to be, Listening/
Why cant they understand me/
Treated as another species/
Because I’m not the average human being/

This freestyle originally went alone to the 25 To Life instrumental. So picture the flow like that.

[ScottJames]

umm i didnt like this. a lot of words didnt rhyme and ur flow was way off. simple vocab.