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Short Verse 2

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I'm a street individual, lyrics are my scriptures
makin' so much doe, my salary gross at least 10 figures
triumph in war battles against the best
my armor impenetrable like a bullet proof vest
it's hard to digest the lyricism and skills combined
design to bring light, the masses that are blind
I survived the mainstream contamination
patiently waitin', sniper in hand ready for assassination
shots taken, at those who sold their souls to the industry
instantly, my squad, we comin' hard like the infantry
highly trained, armed with explosive grenades
my double sharp blade cuts precisely through veins
the words that I say strike faster than snakes
aye yo, this venomous rage is deadly insane
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lol


This Was Ok

You Didnt Have Any Multies Or Real Punches But It Had Ah' Flow Still ..
You Should Hit Tha Cyphers Some And Start Textin Constantly
It Wasnt As Bad As Yezzir Made It Seem But You Could Definitely Elevate
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this was ok...doesnt really seem like anything lyrical to me...seems like you just want to brag...which is cool...but until your doing it...and doing well I might add...it may seem to cause a more respectable view on what your aiming for...if you understand what I mean :)

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