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Part Of a New Track im Writin

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i'm Shit at Thinkin Of Topics So i Wrote Sumfin About How i Always Start Somethin New And Lose interest Quickly And Start a New Track 2 Go The Same Way Etc Lmao



"Faced-With-a-Pad" it's Like a "Race-With-My-Rap" To Make a "BreakThrough-Attack" ..//
My "Patience-is-Snapped", Cuz i Need An Opening, To Flow-With-it, "Pacing-Back" ..//
Start a Track And Leave it Half Done, Routes Spreading Like Spider Webs ..//
"Apply-The-Best" Skill Until i'm "Tired-n-Stressed" ..//
"Keep-On-The-Track" .. "Peep-Round-Ya-Back" Watching "Evolution-Take-Place" ..//
it's a "Pedal-Pushin-Pace-Race" .. "Levels-Zoomin-Great-Pace" ..//
Lookin Back at Older Tracks i Made, My "Vision-Was-Blurry" ..//
i Tried To "Finish-in-Hurry" Too Much i "Deminished-All-Worry" ..//
it Became "More-Of-The-Product" ..//
Less Of "Meanings-And-Skill" ..//
"Before-i-Had-Caught-Up" ..//
"Messed-Appearence-And-Will" ..//
Not Me But My Tracks, All Fell Off, "Passion-Moved-On" ..//
To Another Sheet, Another Track, "Passing-To-Spawn" ..//
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Post by complexity »

This had some nice metaphors. and was good overall I liked it. I can't wait for the final product. Make sure you leave a link though to a drop you left feedback on.
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this shit was ill man, i heard lawgix been talkin to yuh bout 21st..... get at me on aim if yuh got it homie.

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