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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gaVMrKOR_KA[/video]

[start at 2:24](i did third verse)
-as a young teenager you know he was pheening hope/
-wanted to remove the pain so he relied on weed and coke/
-he just had a recent goal twisting it till he would choke/
-isolate him self from pain now he has the weakest soul/
-you know the reason tho,wanted some one to be there when he was low/
-slowly throwing his life away hoping to end it with speed and coke/
-but he don’t know,the path he’s taking is the death he’s on/
-drowning his heart so he won’t stop untill his breath be gone/
-cus his hearts bashing quick on something far from tragic kid/
-depressed cus his 5 year old brother died from a car accident/
-now all this shit effects,his family,but this kid regrets/
-making up the biggest threat,so this kid injects heroin into his neck/
-a girl who would tell her self it’ll get better than this/
-she’d pour her heart out threw letters and scripts/
-souls cold with in but cant keep it warm with a sweater and shit/
-broken hearted from a break up so she escapes away and severs her wrist/
-and it aint clever a bit,hides her scars and lies instead/
-she lies in bed crying next thinking why it gets hard so she sighs and lets/
-this guy with dreads effect her mind with stress so she cry’s and gets/
-her tool for happiness so her heart drops as the blade strikes her flesh/
-she was walking home from school with james black the kid who wore plain hats/
-then she turned on the corner of MAZE AV where she was pulled into a strange van/
-she was raped,dragged,broke the dames back,face scratched,face slapped/
-finished off and left her to die for on the train tracks/




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damn bro..intense...great storyline, kept me at it...it'd be tight if you wrote this again and had the guy and girl cross paths in their lives..could have a killa...good shit tho
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good shit, not my cuppa tea tho dig? too sad lol, maybe if i was in a sad mood... hope the stories not about you bro! if so good luck n shit
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lmfao no the story;'s not about me lol i heard the original song
and the guy would throw in random story topics about people
and there problems lmfao i just followed along with the concept xD
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