Making a Name For My Self

[Kulture]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZY8KgPdFKkU

Starts at 0:11

I wanna make a classic and make people think its euthisatic fantasic like magic, not plain like plastic but strong like elastic,
listening to this instrumental doesn't make me mental but makes me feel gentle, restful and less stressful with a pencil,
I'm killing, ripping, spitting on this beat, as the beat it goes through my feet it feels elite enough to make an army fleet,
I'm full of love and pursuit of wisdom, cause of the rhythm I bring to the kingdom, I only become fearsome when need some,
the definition of my ambition, is to become a legendary limited edition, for all the people to listen of what i've written,
I'm not as hardcore, like that game L.A. Noire, but I'm sure if I went on a tour I wouldn't be immature, and I'm ensure,
I ent no gangster or dancer like MC Hammer, I'm just a normal rapper that likes to cause a rapture and a important matter,
I can't wait to make a single, then again i'll probaberly get shot with pistol, its tearful when you lose someone whos skillful,
I like the meaning, with there screaming beaming feeling, when there speaking rapping with there rhyme scheme scheming,
when I write I plan out throughout this rap, like its all that, I write about the matter for people to find the answer,

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[KING RUM12]

Nothing wrong wit the style...seems like ur forcin...font down itself either
..(I'm as hard as that game la noire) ur harder then..that.be unstoppable ...u r stepping it up..keep it up ur ill! Be meener ..

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[Kulture]

Thanks for the feedback.

[2ill15]

I saw the other few you posted today and your style definitely improved. The rhymes make a lot more sense.

[Kulture]

Thanks i've noticed it as well.