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the ME in TEAM

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listen up!!!!!


im tired of all the wining the cacophony of noises
the strangulation of air ways i was trying to be avoiding
the emasculation of women the words we be destroying
the average turned to savage a victim of the poison
drinking, fucking, eating, smoking hoping to just join in
left and right conjoined twins the fight for the hemisphere
the godless gods of men an frauds the reason he sent me here
the vented fears an hopeless dreams the prophecy we wrote
a constant drone of mobile phones the hypocrisy we chose
the oddity thats cloaked in desires we falsely hold
the sauce we soak inside our throats to numb away the day
as the rich get richer while we bicker the slums just stay in place
it dumb to pray for faith, in our own constructed deities
as we defeat the ME in Team and wonder why we be diseased

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DOPE!!! We're killing ourselves with our own selfish actions and diseased minds. That's the message I got from this. Crazy multies in places. Fuckin fire drop, bruh.
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Post by KING RUM12 »

I like how u told me Wut ur tired of....then started killing tht shit...multies on point..I like tht hype line...the reason God sent me here...fire drop...want more.

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Wow this was nasty. I agree, your multies were sick and I liked the message as well.
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youre a thoughtful little bastard arent ya??? anyways flow was on point and ya vocab is WIIIIIDE, your a fuckin beast dude.
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thanks guys upping
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very nice.... :clap: i liked this section a lot go on and keep droppin that fire and i'll keep reading it

average turned to savage a victim of the poison
drinking, fucking, eating, smoking hoping to just join in
left and right conjoined twins
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