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Daniel Aliff - Twice The Legal Limit (feat. Seven)

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Daniel Aliff - Twice The Legal Limit (feat. Seven)

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newest track that's been completed

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Re: Daniel Aliff - Twice The Legal Limit (feat. Seven)

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as soon as i heard the blue sky black death beat, i knew you guys have to do justice to it, and you did.

Shit is dope fam, flow is on point and delivery is dope. I like the hook too at the end gave it a nice touch. This is download worthy!
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Trippy beat. Vocals sound like they could use a bit of a boost, still understandable. The content is dark so I feel like you should have tried to make your energy voice fit it. The lyrics are great, I like the track. Good flow, very few slip ups. Keep it up.
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thanks for the feedback man

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