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Mac
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I Been..
Dropped An Hit, Stomped An Kicked, Clocked Wit Shit/
An Still Don't Budge, Cuz I'm Still no Punk, An You Will Get Punched//
Right Square In Ya Mouth, If You Dare To Annouce, Some Imperative Nouns/
You'll Marry The Ground, Shit's A Barrial Now, You Can't Barely Amount//
To The Shit That I Preach, I'm Itchin To Be, A Flippen Emcee/
That'll Flip Anything, You Flippen It(at) Me, Like Mission Complete//
So Pay Attention To Me, I'll Have You Clintchin Ya Teeth/
Madder Then Shit, Batterin Fist, An That's How You'll Know, That Mac's In This Bitch!//
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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

yeah yeah Not bad...Top Half of your drop was my fav..8.0...
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Thanks Man.

Uppin For Feed..
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Post by complexity »

ILL flow. I really have no reservations besides the length. But good for a short freestyle
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Post by Mac »

Word, Thanks Man. I Was Actually Gonna Try Somethin But Then I Changed My Mind In The Middle Of The Flow..But Word Man Thanks.

Still Uppin..
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post a link.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

ey so so.. not bad not great it was alright
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Post by Mac »

8th, Read My Other Drop On This Thread...

EkomS Blow me..lol thanks man.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i likeed the rhyme scheme in this one, it was msn type shit, we should do a text collab or somethin, take it back to the ole days kid. getta hold of me man.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Mac »

Yeah man, No Doubt. Lemme Know When, Prolly Not Today Cuz I Got A Track That I'm Gonna Try An Finish BUt Just Lemme Know! Turn Back History In This Mother Fucker lol..Be Easy Man
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

fo sho
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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read my PM. respond with a link and ill unlock this thread.
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