Im Out Fa Da Green .. Choppin Um Lean
Potz In Da Cream Stop N Juz Steam/
Clockin Drug Skeem Serve It Hot/
Cookin Money Up Work Da Pot
Frum Jers 2 Pac , Bring It Back
Lyk DEATH/ I Get Green
Lyk Tree Activists (In Sets)/
We Grown Men Out Fa Cash No Joke
I Can "kid-less"/Rawer Den A Fetus
Kick Ha Stomick Lef Kid Less/
Pimp A Ho Inna Pink Dress Till No
Tits Left.. Money 2 Da Brain She
Can Give Head/ Try N Dream Street
Let My Cream Speak "Spit Led"/
U'll Get "FLAMED" Fuck A Bag
Lyk Mids Fed.. Shit Sellz
Got Bagz Lyk Dro-Haze..N U Can
"Sniff Ya Face Off" Lyk a Nose Gauge/
Most 8's Three Point Five .. Crushed Frum A Leaf Den Turn'd
White/ Fienes Yea I Gott It "POPPIN" If u Ayn
Seen Da Light/ Piece Of Height (CRACK-CRACK),
Dey Alwayz Come Back Fast .. Ayn Da Past Cat
POTIENCY Givez um Flash Back/ Sack Cash Lyk
Nuts Bleedin Bills/BILLS Yea Fuck Speakin Mills
Oxy's E's Vics Speedin Pills...<U Sick? Im Feedin
iLL/Deadly Fa Loot Till My "Fevas-Grill'd"..Seizers
Will Spazztic Mattic .. Spazzin Maticz Grab Da
Cabbage SAVAGE BLASTIN/
Massive Grabbin Cash .. N Laughin
Stackin Packs Kid/
Runna GET MONEY Till My
Red Timz Turn "black bits"/
Fresh So Fly N i'll Still B Pushin White
Gettin Money If My "Depth So High"..Chest
Go Bye Wan BREATHE Da WEALTH
Den Da Body Heat Iz SELL'D/
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this was pretty much all forced ass multis, you need alotta vocab work or something
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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Ok ill try explaining the term "vote link" , which is something you need to include in every new verse you submit in 'The Scriptures'. If you cant understand this , then i quote drunken jesus "You're a fuckin idiot"(or somethin like that).
-Alright , you felt godly lyrical and you're gonna write some kickass verse . First what you do is think....
-Was there ever a thread you read and gave feedback on? If yes , then go to that thread and copy the link of that thread (The link can be found in the address bar at the top of your internet explorer).
-Now go to the Scriptures and post your new verse
and write the subject line $GET MONEY$. Cool
-Now you write your verse in, pretty cool.
-Now before pressing SUBMIT , you paste that link you posted.
-Now you can press submit. thank you.
-Alright , you felt godly lyrical and you're gonna write some kickass verse . First what you do is think....
-Was there ever a thread you read and gave feedback on? If yes , then go to that thread and copy the link of that thread (The link can be found in the address bar at the top of your internet explorer).
-Now go to the Scriptures and post your new verse
and write the subject line $GET MONEY$. Cool
-Now you write your verse in, pretty cool.
-Now before pressing SUBMIT , you paste that link you posted.
-Now you can press submit. thank you.
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cause we don't know what your talking about? lmao try again kiddo
do you even know what forced multis are? their strings of multis that don't look or sound natural your verse had alot of them, nothing was complex to the point that anyone with a highschool reading level wouldn't get it, alotta the rhymes are just unnatural and are gibberish
i'll point out just one example
Most 8's Three Point Five .. Crushed Frum A Leaf Den Turn'd
White/ Fienes Yea I Gott It "POPPIN" If u Ayn
Seen Da Light/ Piece Of Height
three point five is straight, leaf den turn'd white? syllables don't match and that ain't how yay's made kiddo lmao, seen da light is straight, but "piece of height" when have you EVER heard someone say piece of height
do you even know what forced multis are? their strings of multis that don't look or sound natural your verse had alot of them, nothing was complex to the point that anyone with a highschool reading level wouldn't get it, alotta the rhymes are just unnatural and are gibberish
i'll point out just one example
Most 8's Three Point Five .. Crushed Frum A Leaf Den Turn'd
White/ Fienes Yea I Gott It "POPPIN" If u Ayn
Seen Da Light/ Piece Of Height
three point five is straight, leaf den turn'd white? syllables don't match and that ain't how yay's made kiddo lmao, seen da light is straight, but "piece of height" when have you EVER heard someone say piece of height
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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