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Where You Stand #1

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you will never sell out a venue, even though ur more commeralized then tv
what you dont see is next time you will need more then personal-lies to beat me
to assume in a rhyme about personal lives is sleazy but even worst its easy
and its what you did in your verse to beat me, your the first ta cheat me
what happen with diverse was cheesy, it seems they all want my down fall
but back to mac who seriously lacks and gets more wack then round ball
lets chat about his god awful flow, and even on a more personal note
how hes the worst person to know, an asshole, and the first to choke
when i make him eat the verse i wrote, this fat fuck is really about to blow
and i dont mean getting famous, on the intro i couldnt even make out the flow
your a fucking anus,a hoe, a pain, ill take a blade n it will go straight to his throat
so im making this dope it will leave you choked and theirs no way ur breaking the rope
im taking this oath to leave every fake dead in the street so your dreading the heat
twisted better not meddle in the beef, thats right everythings said in defeat
mac is behind me at least, yet it sounds like his vocals are light years ahead in the beat
thats right queers and he cant handle micz like he has parkisons disease
all shakey its getting worst lately you see i have been holding it back
now this beef is over in fact, even tramatik proved your a half assed emcee
you know what happened to my last enemy your not even grasping it
its a closed casket, close the latches, light the wick throw the matches
now thats fire like you know my rap is but your a faggot who wont say it
revenge is expensive and you will pay it im not putting up with ur gay shit
any longer ur new placement is in the stomach of this monster
if you ever are an opening act guaranteed they will be selling ear plugs at the concert
the only king unhonored, i had to make up an award for you
nobody else would sponsor it, you have multis with absolutely no content
thats why most ur drops have no comment, you just flow non sense
thats honest your like a friend who likes to tell secrets you got 'no promise'
in Illest news you tried to be a comic, by adding a Sadamm Joke
problem is i heard that shit before without the Sadamm quote
my next rap will be deeper then your fucking moms throat
nevermind nope, its impossible plus you will never write like toms wrote
thats more of an obstacle then jumping rope for this over sized bloat
you damn near broke every toe when you tried to stand on your souls
his fat rolls are larger then rap shows his belly button looks like an asshole
his cup is half full he cant even swim he weights to much to paddle
plus his mouth is full of more bull shit then our fucking battle
if you got a gat pull it and blow my brains out i would still be more intelligent
and if you didnt attempt to bite puns whole style maybe u would be more relevant
i must not be elegant im in a beef with a fucking indoor elephant
i would say i have 'more in store' but that would be in your element!
this selevant faggot thinks he has a chance in a beef with complexity
you have yet to see best in me, and reach ur full destiny
especially now i suggest you write down some rhymes quickly
this fucking cow thinks in our battle that he actually out write me!
the way you put together words its like im playing scrabble with a dyslexic
leave his neck disconnected im so gifted you thought you ripped me open
you must be twisted i cut your throat in,with a potition that wasnt enough to choke him
but now ive spoken and exposed him like girls gone wild
now move along child, cuz to beef with me your using the wrong style
i suggest you try eminems for a while, with all the shitty lyrics you have compiled
i think your liable to get on a collab with kevin fedderline
and really get out shined cuz i know he would make a better rhyme! 27
nevermind you have declined so much over time that kevin wouldnt collab
he would be like damn son you flow bad, and hit you in the gonads
hit ya with a low jab, ill put ya in a red line aint talking a notepad
your style is out of date like an old fad, so leave feedback on my drop
and finally see that im on top, nevermind i dont need mac on cock
i mean back where he was at when he first came to the site
who the fuck convinced you this faggot to remain on the mic
damn your not bright, like my fucking broken spot light
and your from cleveland thats nice heard its like paris
your hometeams suck so bad there even Im embarassed
now i always cherished the kings back in the day
i mean real 'artest' ones that could actually rap in a way!
its ok, im also steal another player and put webber on the beats
my credit because I rap will last me forever on the street
18-5 on illest, im the shit man, i had you spotted like a hit man
and ill admit i ran when yokuzona was trying to spit damn
this fat bitch aint going to mac shit, hes got jokes
but no rhymes to back it, gatz with no bullets to blast it
battles with no matches, raps with no tactics
its so graphic like subsist that you dont want to half to rip against this
complex will leave you defenseless like iraq in an instant
in person i will never see him, reason? cuz everythings bad about cleveland
and im not leaving town, u keep 'recieving from faggots' like the cleveland browns
Garcia is gay thats the truth, and its fucked up (wow)
we are even now last night i was counting down to midknight
i was thinking who on the site isnt that tight that i would like to fight, right?
so i thought 40 bars of pain just might bring back some life to my mic
then i was like well there is one faggot his name is mac
his game is wack, so i listened to that intro and it was the lamest track
so now the pain is back you thought this was painless rap
but thats brainless mac always thinking he is tight
really i should help this poor faggot like jesus might
when he said i like to start shit, its obvious he is right
i lurk in the darkness, working the hardest, to become a perfect artist
heres a verse to start shit n 'mac has a bullet on back' so hes first to target
im narccastic, my online dating life never existed
subsist is on my dick it doesnt make me look any different
i can kick your ass in an instant, and prove that you are simplistic
making a diss track to someone this wack is bad but i will risk it
everyone already knows on the site he is 'insignificant like limp bizkit'
shit kid, if you vote for twisted in one more fucking time though
i will ban your ass, where the fuck did your mind go
its like i ran away from ur head and that ugly mug you managed to get
this kids so fat when he walked out his house he damaged the step
this is complex you will get fucking wrecked if you even attempt to kill me
then you will get sent to philly to learn to rap from drunken jesus
so you get your friends an all them other chumps n read this
before you die from diseases even if your after life you will need this
more then your 500 bags of reeses you got for christmas
if these stupid fuck does respond watch his diss miss
you just got dismissed like highschool classes with bomb threats
how the fuck is simpleton going to battle complex
your going to get executed like saddam next
the way you drop wack lyrics youd think it was a contest
toms quest is eliminate mac from the planet
like i dont even support the amendments
after i drop this diss all you will hear is 'holy shit' ask demented
thats it though accept it or not like a file
you bite off more then you could chew like ya style
good luck in the tournament though you faggot
i promise you though man you wont win that shit
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I Unno If It Was Just Cuz All That Garbage Was Directed Towards Me. But That Was Mad Wack lol. On Some Serious Shit, Your Name Should Be Like Tramatik's Just Replace The T With A D. Drama Queen Ass Mother Fucker..lmao..Anyway If You That Mad Cuz You Lost To This "Wack Emcee" Then Battle Me Again......In Audio.....Should Be A Sure Win For You Since I Can't Stay On Beat Right? Bahah
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Post by complexity »

it wasn't wack, apparently you didn't even read it
and im not being a drama queen, i kinda think i got screwed in the battle, but its not that big of a deal, obviously i just felt like writing hence the sixty bars you dumb shit
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LMAO @ Not A Big Deal. <--Now That's Funnier Then All Them Bars Put Together.

Yeah I Feel You It Aint A Big Deal, You Just Wrote A 10 Chapter Diss Cuz You Was Bored..Yeah I Feel You..Lmao..You So Full Of Shit Ya Eyes Is Brown.

But Aside Of All That Bitchmade Bullshit, Like I Said If You Wanna Get At Me Again, Then Do It In Audio..lol Happy New Years Man..lmao
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lol this shit was hot,it took me a few hours to read it but it was solid.
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1. Ok. Now stop spamming my thread

2. Each bar in this was hotter then anything you have wrote on the site, so i don't understand where you are coming from

3. An audio has nothing to do with this. Are you just saying their is no way you can write better then me, so you need it to be audio, for um some reason.

4. I write constantly so doing 60 bars about one person is nothing (you should try to write more often maybe you will improve)

5. Calling this wack is retarded as hell, because you say nice to a lot wacker of shit, maybe your just on the cock of a lot of people, don't know.

6. You can respond one more time, and i wont respond, so that ends the spam.

7. If you want proof i can write ten times better then you, just compare threads

8. saying im a drama queen is pointless, you have got in more beef in 2 months then i have in a year, it has nothing to do with being a drama queen, its something to do on the site, are you fucking retarded? Plus you annoy me

9. Im starting to really think you do think your big pun or something, i don't know, sorry if this diss hurt your feelings
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why wont u 2 love birds just battle once n for all.
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Post by Mac »

Writing 60 Bars Is One Thing, 60 Bars About One Person Is Another, Yet Got The Nerve To Say I'm On The Dick Of Folks?? Lol Ok.

Only Part I'm Confused About Is Where I'm So Wack An All That, But You Still Lost. I Must Be Retarded To Not Be Able To Grip On To That Assumption.

As Far As That Being Wack, Maybe That Was The Wrong Word For It. I've Seen Better Shit From You Then What You Wrote Up There^^, No Disrespect Was Initially Intended.

To Me, Yeah You Are A Drama Queen. That Up There ^^ Was A Bitch Move. Cuz The Only Reason You Wrote That Is Cuz You Lost A Battle. If You Did Do It Just To Do It, I Wouldn't Of Said Nothing, E-Shook Ya Hand Gave You A Pat On The Back An Said Nice Job. But It's The Principle.

As Far As Audio, I Believe Audio Means Alot More Then Text But What Ever You Say Man. Next Time I'll Just Forfeit If It's Gonna Reach This Point Where You Feel The Need To Write 80 Bars lol...Anyway It's W/e Man If You're Mad You Lost Then Maybe This Rap Shit Aint For You..
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Post by complexity »

oh no, i have wrote multiple disses i didn't post about you before the battle,

i told subsist or micz i was going to you before 40 bars of pain before the tournament was even setup, ask them

a loss is a loss

**dont post again*
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I'm Always Willing To Squash Beef. Beef Only Begets More Beef An To Me It's All Pointless. He Says We Never Got Along, But I've Never Talked To The Guy, So Unless He's Got Some Mental Issue With People That's The Only Thing I Can Think Of As To Why He Wants Beef With Me.. But That's Cool, I'm Done With It. If He Wants To Battle To Settle It, Call Me Out An After The Tournament And We Will If It's That Big Of An Issue....
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hhmmm pretty nice i guess

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mac is behind me at least, yet it sounds like his vocals are light years ahead in the beat
if you ever are an opening act guaranteed they will be selling ear plugs at the concert

this was pretty nice i liked the flow and punches as well as personals i see it did piss mac off a bit because he knows he could never keep up with you in a beef, but yea it had some pretty average vocab, rhyming was ok, flow and structure was nice but like i said the punches and personals made it dope, and let mac know that your serious i think hes scared of you...

and now mac...i expect something in return or i will clown the hell outta u in every battle,verse, poem or cypher i see u in cause ur the same mother fucker that wanted to talk shit about that viral diss....ha ha. ill be waiting.
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Lol @ 16micz Thinkin He Knows Me, Like What He Says Actually Matters.
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how do i think i kno u, sdfu nigga all i said was im expecting a diss in return or you'd be real hypocritical and fake,wack,gay,dumb,stupid etc if u didnt....considering you called me all those things because i "didnt diss viral back"
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Man At least I Was Man Enough To Reply The First Time, Which Is More then I Can Say About You, You homo. So How I'm Hypocritical? For One, This Is Scriptures Dumb Shit, For 2 Viral Dissed You In Audio Battles, In The Battle Grounds...Dick, If He Called Me Out, Or Spit Something In The Text Battle Grounds I Would've Replied, Now Eat A Dick Man, k?
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viral dissed me in a record not in audio battle grounds u dumb shit and i replied as well i didnt reply with bullshit sayin his diss was wack either i was man enough to respect his effort but you on the other hand your punk ass wants to talk shit when i didnt record or write a diss back to him....and now you're doing exactly what i was...so make a move u bitch ass nigga im done arguin with u though cause you're really a waste of time.
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