quick verse i wrote to a beat i made last night

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 3:55 am

i see the beauty in violence and use it abusing the tyrants,
that try fueling the fire of assuming i'm useless and silent,
instead of truly a hybrid of mechanics only the newest of science,
can smoothly decipher homie my movements are aligned with,
a tune from orions belt others can't catch the frequency,
so theirs no paths to beating me i untap the beast in me,
relax in easily then snap with ghats that blast repeatedly,
enacting evil scenes from tragic acts of the baddest dreams i seen
theirs no man on this planet as deep as me so keep the peace,
before a hammer is landing to leave you abandoned handled
and slammed through the granite of the earths inner crust
damning you to stand with the man that expanded my madness
until i surpassed him and cracked though the canvas
to stand amongst mortals with a hand of love for you
if you bow in my presence if not cower and question
my power in seconds you'll be devoured & ground into sections
my talent is endless dreams and reality got my head twisted
i dunno whats real but i don't die in either so consequences
don't apply to me everybodys lied to me so fuck what you try to be
i've seen & defiantly climbed its peak 'till it was time to leave
cause it was nothing but a fucking waste of time to me

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 4:37 am

"a tune from orions belt others can't catch the frequency,
so theirs no paths to beating me i untap the beast in me,
relax in easily then snap with ghats that blast repeatedly,
enacting evil scenes from tragic acts of the baddest dreams i seen
theirs no man on this planet as deep as me so keep the peace"

That was my favorite part sick shit. I like the concept to.

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 5:17 am

Agreed With Complex, That's My Favorite Part As Well. That's The Sickest Drop I Think I've Viewed On This Site. Good Shit Man, You Should Drop More Often Shit's Dope To No Extent.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 6:13 am

Yoo This Was A Deadly Verse Nice
U Gunna Put It On Audio??

Favorite Linez - my power in seconds you'll be devoured & ground into sections
my talent is endless dreams and reality got my head twisted
i dunno whats real but i don't die in either so consequences

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 7:41 am

did you watch men in black before this?

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 8:20 am

no, ALF the original alien OG, good looking out to all those that replyed i'll return the favor if i haven't already

and yeah i'm going to record it whenever i find my mic @ hazard

TwIzTiD · Post by **TwIzTiD** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 11:44 am

It was ill.

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 12:31 pm

lol some nice feedback ^

well i liked this..although alot of the vocab went over my head i still could put a with b and understand the lines the rhyme scheme was dope as fuck something ive been trying to accomplish and the lyrics speak for themselves pretty dope drop id give it an 8.5. also, it seemed to be getting better and better after everybar

Fav Line:

relax in easily then snap with ghats that blast repeatedly,
enacting evil scenes from tragic acts of the baddest dreams i seen

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Wed Jan 03, 2007 11:15 pm

i see the beauty in violence and use it abusing the tyrants,
that try fueling the fire of assuming i'm useless and silent,
instead of truly a hybrid of mechanics only the newest of science,
can smoothly decipher homie my movements are aligned with,

^^Fav Lines Along With The Ones Complexity Pointed Out. Multis Were Present The Whole Way Thru And it Flowed Nicely. Overall it Was ill Lol. And How The Fuck Do u Write 2 a Beat That Shit Puts Me Off Concentratin Lmao

quick verse i wrote to a beat i made last night

quick verse i wrote to a beat i made last night

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