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When its Reppin Time i Got Tecs - n - Nines
Complex Wit Grind Deepa Meanin Dress Ya Lines
Tryna Get Wit Mine Put Da Heat To ya Head Like Tempa Time/
Sick Glimpse When i "Ripp Shit"
Chrome To Ya Dome Leave Ya Brain A "Miss-Fit"/
Devour Ya Bones in Quick Minutes
Foam in Sourist Form Till "Drippin"/
Get Bodied Like " Ab Structure"
Yea Kid Aids In Ya Past Motha
Havin Sex Only Time u Sick Wit "Wrap Brotha"/

Jus A Few Bars I Spit Cause Im Bored ..
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

LOL finally...u got da structure down homie..keep spittin all ur sihit like dat n u b str8...far as that piece goes for a few bars bein bored its ight..but ut structure def improvin if u keep it that style everytime ---1---
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Post by 16 Micz »

was pretty basic but decent nothing really stood out to me but the piece wasnt that long to begin with i liked the rhyming and thats pretty much it with such a small verse but keep it up man..
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Post by Haz »

Aiight Good Lookin Out Micz lol i Got Chu Wid
Sum Feed Back On Ya Next Shit `1
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Post by Typeo »

Decent actually. Still some fucked up wording. The last line you had in your verse is the best you've written yet.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

^^ ..
Agreed ..
Well Structured & Everythin` actually Made Since ..
This Was a Koo` Drop .. Nothin` Too ill ..
it Was aiight ..

& Wdf is Sono ??..Lol
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Typeo »

so know.
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Post by Mac »

I agree As Well. This Is The Best Piece Of Seen From You And Yo Peep It... IT MADE SENSE! lol. Good Shit man.
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