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Solo
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This Shit waz some what Subliminal About a Drug Problem I had...And Im puttin it all in multie Form...Each line Corresponds with each other... I dont usealy show my multiez with hyphenz but I will here

Like-A-Twinkie-And-Shit-I-Got-Cream-in-the-Middle
I-Waz-Thinking-a-Bit-To-Pop-Steam-just-a-little
Homoz-Try-and-touch-my-skill,-They-get-Capped-in-the-process
Solo-Rhymez,-So-Fuck-The-Kill,-Pay-Checkz-Fast-to-my-Pocketz
Livin-Life-Diggin-Gravez,-Lay-ya-ass-in-the-dirt
Spittin-right,-Rippin-Gayz,-Take-the-cash-from-ya-purse
Molestin-the-mic-when-I-Touch-the-cord
The-best-one-in-sight-Blessed-right-from-the-lord
Lighting-Flamez-for-Light,-Reachin-up-to-the-Sky
Fighting-pain-tonight,-Tweakin-dust-then-im-high
Smokin-the-crack,-seeing-strage-subliminalz-verses
Tokin,-Infact,-Being-caged-for-a-politcal-pourpose
Lacin-the-pipe-with-aidz,-gettin-ripped-into-peices
Makin-the-right-shit,-Cane-Spreadin-Spitten-diseases
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Post by Haz »

Son .......


LOL Im Playin Yo Dat Shitz Nice Man I Ayn Seen
2 Much From U While i Bin Here .. But Dats Alot
Nica Den Alot Of Peoples Shit Here LOL GOOD
Shit Da Multis Wuz Good My Favorite Part Wuz

Solo-Rhymez,-So-Fuck-The-Kill,-Pay-Checkz-Fast-to-my-Pocketz
Livin-Life-Diggin-Gravez,-Lay-ya-ass-in-the-dirt
Spittin-right,-Rippin-Gayz,-Take-the-cash-from-ya-purse

U Came Nice Wit Tha Multis Shit Made Sense yo lol
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Word, That Was Quality Lol. And The Best Lines For Me Were The Same as Hazard's. Keep Droppin
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solo that shit was hot i didnt have a fav part cuz i thought the whole thing wuz good..keep droppin like this more often and we might have compeition lol stay up -1-
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Solo wrote:And Im puttin it all in multie Form...Each line Corresponds with each other... I dont usealy show my multiez with hyphenz but I will here
Why u do that when some of the lines doesn't correspond? didn't get that shit man.. it's okay to show u're multies, when u have multies..

but the verse was good.. liked the concept, and vocab was straight.. deep, but u also involve some humour in the verse, liked that.. keep em comin man!
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Thanx for all the feed homiez...Didint expect to get that much lolz
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Word lol Drop Sumthin Else On One Rapping Concept In Da Scriptures Again I Like Readin Creative Shit lol
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