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I Stand Here Vol.2

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I continue the legacy, and rip apart enemies,destroy your destiny
name an emcee that is next to me, only the niggas that rep with me
but even they know my tendancies to flow fatally without energy
i attack with raps, and never let the bad lyrics enter me
but i hold the talent that every emcee lacks, whether ur green or black
every rapper u see on MTV is wack, rap city is crap
that emcee is trash, cause i cant believe his ass, when it comes down to it
bodies u claim to spray rounds through em but u lay down foolish

Check me out,

im not pistol tottin, pistol holdiin, or rapping bout pistol loading
but not afraid to grip a toast and have ur cranium splittin open
you claim be pitchin dope and flippin the cake
but all i see is steak and potatos on that dinner plate
now the enemies wait cause im sure they see it coming
cause i plan to knock down dominos, like a pizzas coming
understand the reasons for me to diss emcees and honestly
rip emcees into pieces so the little african kids could eat
but dont worry about grippin a piece just get a beat
cause u dont wanna write thunder vs thunder cause ill split your screen
always a troubled kid,hallways i puddled them
id be better at "twelve", lets play "dominos" anybody got a "double six"
i hold a double "8" with an "m" on the back
but u couldnt hold 16 with em on a track

R.I.P

you see, never roll wit snakes and rats
leave em with aching backs, not just makin raps
im claimin facts, name a track, that i cant shame or slap
leave a rappers cranium cracked, put his brain in a bag
just as crazy as dad, at a baby its sad
im just a baby u fag? how crazy is that
you claimed to slay me in raps but name me the facts
you couldnt make me wack, if u gave me ur raps
but id let u take em back then take ur face and smash
leave with the craziest laugh, how crazy was that
these are just my laziest raps, u know how babies can act
so write a fuckin eminem verse, but u couldnt slay with that.

Get on my level i stand here vol.2

to be continued.

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Post by Momeijah »

lets play "dominos"

Ooooohhh u Dont Wnna Play Lmao
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Post by 16 Micz »

lol i see u caught one of the 4 or 5 disses....
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i Never Read The Thing, i Just Saw That Line....Blah @ u
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Post by 16 Micz »

i see all of u fukers that i left feedback on, online dont be shy...
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They're Not Shy They Just Dont Wnna Read ur Fuckin 8796875 Line Bullshit Verse
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Post by Mac »

I Like This One Better Then The Last One, You Were More Consistent An Didn't Fall Off Like The Other Drop. Overall Decent Ryhme Scheme, Structure, Multies Was Good, Seemed To Be On Point. It Lacks Creativity Though, An That's What Keeps My Attention In A Verse, So I Got Kinda Bored Till The Last Verse, Multies The Whole Way Through. Good Shit Though.

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(but even they know my tendancies to flow fatally without energy
i attack with raps, and never let the bad lyrics enter me)

(now the enemies wait cause im sure they see it coming
cause i plan to knock down dominos, like a pizzas coming)
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cause i plan to knock down dominos, like a pizzas coming <--Line's Been Played More Than 16 Micz' Mom.

AND i Made The Best One. 'i'll Tip Domino Like His Pizza Boys'...Cuz Dominos Also Tip...And Cuz i Rawk
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Lmao ^^
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Post by 16 Micz »

aw domino sdfu stop bitching cause i dissed u...ive never seen or heard anyone say that line so calm your ass down...and stop posting in my thread if ur not gonna leave feedback asswipe...if u dont like what i wrote...do something about it.
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Post by complexity »

"im not pistol tottin, pistol holdiin, or rapping bout pistol loading
but not afraid to grip a toast and have ur cranium splittin open"

That was a nice line. I don't think you killed the diss, but it was pretty straight. You are pretty good at subliminals which is cool. Anyway I'm tired. sleeeps
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16 Micz, ill Reply if i Want, i Could Diss Myself Better And i Just Did With That 1 Line. Stop Thinkin ur God's Gift 2 Keystyling Cuz ur an Admin...
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Post by 16 Micz »

lol wdf does this have to do with me being an admin...im not trying to act like i have power over u or anything cause im admin, its cause im better....if u were to diss me i wouldnt ban u or give a fuck really so my admin has nothing to do with this.
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Post by Momeijah »

So Why Do u Think ur Like...The Best Thing...Omg..Ever Lmao.
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Pretty Koo` Drop ..
i Liked Tha Multies Most about This ..
`cus it Flowed Together Hella Good ..
Punches Were a Bit Played ..
But it Was Koo` .....
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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