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My Stance Pt.2

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I don't need to Raise-the-Iron, Take my mic an I Aim-an-Fire/
At Folks For An Insane-Reminder, You aint a Gangster-Writer/
An I want you all to Take-in-Mind, The reality of ya Fakest-Lines/
Shit's played out like Changin-Time, An BET done Stained-ya-Mind/
Like Ja-Rule that shit is Not-Cool, Actin like Pac's A-Post-Le(apostle)/
When ya Not-So get off his Cock-Ho, For you really get Shot-Yo'/
An No I aint gonna be the one to Do-It, Cuz I aint the type to be the one to Pull-It/
An That's-Official I'd Grab-The-Pistol, An stab you in the Abs-like-Jitsu/
If That's-the-Issue for I'd Pop-A-Round, You'd be in a Box-Underground/
If Big an Pac-Were-Around, So quit claimin gangster an Hoppin-Around/
Knowin damn well you aint Pop-Nuttin, It's wack so Stop-Frontin/
That shit is Not-Somethin you've seen whitnessed or Got-Up-In/
-------------------->So Fuck-It Just Stop-Bluffin<-------------------
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

it was nice... but it fell off for me a lil bit in parts, but it was structured nice and flowed right for the most part. keep it up tho
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by B-Bear »

yeah man.. always keepin good multies mac! one of your greatest qualities.. liked that verse, concept was a bit played out though, but u turned into your own version - that's nice.. flow was good as well man.. keep it up!
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Thanks For The Feed Folks
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Uppin..
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