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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

as usual i take these lyrical vacations where i go a while without rhyming.. so here's a lil rewind n wrap up


these lyrics were random,-at-the-time, but now the handgun's-at-ya-spine, i've reached my peek like when Phantom-had-some-rhymes, back when Typeo stretched bars and i could stand-on-half-ya-lines, see... beef is still beef and i've been starvin-for-days, but i won't kill ya.. i'll just be carvin-ya-graves, and i'll surgically scar u for life when i put ur heart-into-trays, the same way i'll have u put these bars-into-praise, no kiddin.. this shit ain't funny so u'll be laughin-ya-last, cuz i've been fuckin ya mother while ya'll been rappin-for-cash, i've been grabbin-her-ass, and after i killed her i put her back-in-the-trash, chopped-into-pieces.. and oh yeah.. i've gotten-diseases, that's y im spittin this sick shit and plottin-a-thesis, JESUS!.. quite the carpenter, but i got my own beliefs-bitch, its common sense.. just use a little knowledge-guys.... fuck hope, "do wat cha want and don't appologize!"- EkomS

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i Liked Tha Piece Ova Alll
You Were Strong Wit Your Multis Good Shit
Fav Line : beef is still beef and i've been starvin-for-days, but i won't kill ya.. i'll just be carvin-ya-graves,
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Was a Pretty Koo` Drop ..
Free Drop i Seen From U ..
it Was Solid Fam` ..

i Loved This Lil Part Though ..

i've gotten-diseases, that's y im spittin this sick shit and plottin-a-thesis, JESUS!..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yea just a lil quick drop i typed up out of boredom like most of my writtens, just telling it how it is from my point of view and mentioned a few things from the past.. thx for the feedback tho
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nice man, ill leave more detailed feedback later, and how many fucking times have i told you cut with the bullshit games, if you stopped playing games, you could actually be making money with me, and shit, wtf, tlak to me on aim
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

shit was hype man, the beginnin was dope and all the way thru was fire dude, nice key dude.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Mac »

Good Shit EkomS. Welcome Back (For A Minute) Man. lol

Over All: Structure Was Good, Vocab, Multies Was on Point, Was Consistent All The Way Through The Verse. Just An Over All Dope Drop Man.
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Uppin` For EkomS
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Teef.
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lol 'shalashaska' stil loving that name
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Ekoms Your Multis Are Tight man...
That Was a Nice Little Drop...
Upping..
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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come on upping every1
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Post by precise »

lol wow, people must think this shits the second comming of christ cause he used the word jesus lmaooo with all the "uppins"


anyways yea it was good, flowed nice, multis were on point etc lol

youre still spittin like hannibal bro hahaha
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Post by precise »

OH!!! and i think it would be better for the general public if you could change ur font color!!!
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Post by Sweet Joe »

i agree. shits hard to read bro.
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