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~Symbolikull~
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

seems like yesterday we were sippin forties
hood rats flippin shorties
it's sad tha way these dudes think they know me
brush 'em of like bitches that used to blow me

seems like i suffer from spells of black magic
death is tha reason i'm an addict

fav lines^^^

overall dude this was a solid drop, a lil off in the structure, started off shaky, but its an emotional written and i enjoyed readin it. big ups kid.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

everyone's searchin for tha truth but they cant find it
tha suns so bright it left tha world blinded

hot ass bar^^ lovin that...overall it was sloppy(the structure)but the content was nice..liked the emotion u put it in..like a birds eye view of everything kinda..seemed like 2 me anyways..nice shit doe -1-
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Post by complexity »

Pretty decent. It had a Nas feeling to it in a few spots.
8.0. Best thing I've read from you.
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

I liked it, it was deep help alot of emotion and i liked how you switched the subjects but kept it on topic. Good Job! lol
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Post by RH1NO »

kinda sad but im searchin for revenge after an animus attack
got this ill will to bring animosity back...NICE
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Post by MesaR »

Yeah Homie That was Solid Man Good Work Keep This Shit Up You Seem To Be Elavating Dude Witch Is Dope Good work.
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