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man give it the fuck up....
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lmmfao looky here "whitey" u can just suck my dick... if u don't fuckin like my comments u can just call me out :)
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if ur tired of my comments then call me out :) that easy
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lol so ur scared to call me out huh? lmao thats what i thought u fuckin pussy ass bitch... i fuckin dare u too... but who knows i may drop a call out who knows :)
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Gun talk is ooooold...shits pointless imo...

"ill put a piece in ya mouth like a tooth pick"

Only real simile in there...rest was just pointless bs talk...how many slang words are there for 'gun' and 'head' out there lol...anyway...I dunno what this was meant to be...a diss or just practice type stuff...as practice it was good...but as a diss this didn't have a single attempt at a punch...


Flow was good...rhyming wasn't that great though, and structure was a bit wierd at times...but aside from that this was a pretty solid verse (if you were trying out for Dipset that is)...

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